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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2002-01-16 06:07 PM



Are you cold, wee wren?
I don't see you shivering
Ever Spring to you?

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

© Copyright 2002 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-16 06:10 PM




(smiles) Sooooooooo cute, sweet friend, you always create the most beautiful visions with your words! (smiles) Spring is drawing near, yippee!!! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ellie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

sodpossom
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2 posted 2002-01-16 06:26 PM


Very cute!
Silver Streak
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3 posted 2002-01-16 07:28 PM


Very nice, Ellie. Thanks!

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strbbux
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4 posted 2002-01-16 07:55 PM


Oh Ellie, I love the sweet wrens, thanks floria
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5 posted 2002-01-16 07:56 PM


Very very nice Haiku, Ellie.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Irish Rose
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6 posted 2002-01-16 08:12 PM


Oh, do you speak to the birds too?
I thought I was the only one who did that?
  I could picture this, the bird outside
the window, shivering.  I feed them!
I'm sure they could get along without
it but I don't think I could.  It is too much
fun to watch!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Startime
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7 posted 2002-01-16 08:17 PM


*sigh* a beautiful snapshot that had me remembering visions just like this one. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Suetang
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8 posted 2002-01-16 10:33 PM


Hello Ellie
This was simply beautiful!  Take care....Sue

Suetang

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