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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-01-16 05:49 PM


As a bride she feels like a princess
All in white her face aglow
She had finally found her soulmate
Her love for him continued to grow

She pirouettes in front of the mirror
Feeling like she is walking on air
Soon to be with her prince charming
They'll begin new lives without a care

She's waited so long for this moment
Now all her dreams are coming true
As she imagines him holding her closely
And whispering the words 'I love you'

Rose petals adorn the pathway
That leads the way to her man
He's so proud and so very handsome
As she makes her way to where he stands

Their vows have now been made
They stand together side by side
Both bursting at the seams
From a love they cannot hide

A union made in heaven
Two souls have now combined
They'll be together for all eternity
In body soul and mind

Love found its rightful place
Inside these two very special hearts
Love blooms like a beautiful flower
A new chapter of love about to start

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-16 05:53 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are always sooooooo romantic! (smiles) May this prince and princess forever be wedded in happiness and share a life of true love forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I cried reading this to feel the beauty of this wedding! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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2 posted 2002-01-16 05:54 PM


I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!!This is what love is all about. Joining together heart, body, mind and soul...Sue, this poem is perfection to me. **big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

sodpossom
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3 posted 2002-01-16 05:57 PM


Very beautiful poem of this union of love!
brianbeaudry
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4 posted 2002-01-16 06:25 PM


Beautiful Sue, and perfect timing, I'm sure my daughter felt just like this when she was wed last month!!You have an awsome talent my friend!!
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5 posted 2002-01-16 07:20 PM


Sue...this is simply awesome...and could
reflect any bride's feelings and thoughts
very well...

Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2002-01-16 08:24 PM


Fabulous portrayal of love and what marriage should be, Sue.  Wonderful!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Irish Rose
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7 posted 2002-01-16 08:35 PM


now, this is what it should be like
absolutely.  I love weddings.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Suetang
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8 posted 2002-01-16 10:31 PM


Thank you all for your wonderful words. I'm so glad you liked them.  Take care....Sue

Suetang

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