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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-01-16 05:39 PM

Touch Me In The Morning
~*Marge Tindal*~

Touch me in the morning
when the moon has lost it's glow
When sun has peeked through curtained lace
setting the room aglow~

Feather me softly with rose-petal caresses
from your wandering fingertips
Gently play across my day
with fluttering kisses upon my lips~

Awaken me from slumber
far from the gentle night
Touch me in the morning
make my day dawn bright~

I will turn to you
with the love of you reflected in my eyes
As you touch me in the morning
with thundering surprise~

~I love you~
January 2002

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-01-16 05:42 PM

Absolutely stunning...I LOVE IT!!!!So powerfully sensual and romantic. BRAVO!!!!Hope he knows the passions he has unleashed. **giggling wickedly** **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-01-16 05:52 PM

StarTime~
'**giggling wickedly**'
Just HAD to jump in here ...
Oh .... yes he KNOWS ...
that's why he keeps doing it~
Never has morning been sooooooo awakening~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2002-01-16 05:54 PM

Hello Marge
Your words flowed like a tranquil stream, so very beautiful was this picture you painted.
Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-16 05:56 PM

(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always write love so beautifully! May he forever touch your heart with happiness! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, dearest friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2002-01-16 05:57 PM

Ah Marge, think I'll watch what I say and just say...uh-huh! Beautiful!

jwesley

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

6 posted 2002-01-16 06:00 PM

I'm going to let it go at just a beautiful write.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2002-01-16 06:01 PM

Marge--goodness! What sweet bliss you pour over your cereal in the morning..love it! Give that guy a hug for me for making you so happy!

[This message has been edited by Martie (01-16-2002 07:46 PM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-01-16 07:02 PM

"Feather me softly with rose-petal caresses
from your wandering fingertips
Gently play across my day
with fluttering kisses upon my lips~"

I love that! That's how I want to be touched.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-01-16 07:12 PM

Wow Marge...this is simply a most beautiful
poem dedicated to a man that shows you the
deepest affection and love...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2002-01-16 09:59 PM

SueTang~
Thank you so much ..
I just have to speak what my heart feels~

JWesley~
Uh-huh ... thank you, sweets~

SodPossom~
Thank you very much~

Martie~
Consider the *hug* delivered~
Mmmmmmm ! Kellogg's Raisin Bran and 'bliss' ...
what more could a gal ask for~

MidniteSun~
Awwwwww ... thank you~
I can highly recommend it~

Magnus~
I thank you .. I really do~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2002-01-16 10:31 PM

Oh Marge, another beautiul poem you wrote here. I love it. It is so romantic.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

12 posted 2002-01-16 11:54 PM

                                           Touch me in the morning
                                        when the moon has lost it's glow
                                  When sun has peeked through curtained lace
                                            setting the room aglow~

                                   Feather me softly with rose-petal caresses
                                        from your wandering fingertips
                                           Gently play across my day
                                      with fluttering kisses upon my lips~
====================================================

Why Margie...I never knew...I love you too...errrrr....ummmm... ahhhhh
WHAT??? NOT  FOR ME????

ahahaha ROFL....
Well I dont care who its for...its a BIG OLE *SIGH* waiting to happen...
AND???? Its a IWIHWT ... cuz if I had wrote it....
that would mean Id of been INSPIRED THIS WAY....

Talk about poetic afterglow *teehee*
This is so very lovely Margie...you turn a phrase like few can...
We love ya in love sweets

Even thru the darkest phase, be it thick or thin
Always someone marches brave, here beneath my skin
Constant Craving ... has always been.

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (01-16-2002 11:57 PM).]

True Reflections
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 143
Ohio, USA

13 posted 2002-01-17 09:37 AM

Marge,
I'm beginning to think you are a bit of a romantic. Wouldn't a pop-tart and a juice box be just as great a way to start the day? Ok, maybe not.
Beautiful poem.

Roger

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2002-01-17 09:47 AM

SmartChick~
You know I write my little heart~
It is soooooo full of love it just spills all over the page~

JanetMarie~
LOL ...
Figured that brown-eyed gal would catch your fancy~
Thank you for all you are !
I love you too gal~

TrueReflections~
Roger ... someone gave you a clue ?
LOL ... Nah ! ... I tried 'em ... not even close~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

amigo
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

15 posted 2002-01-17 10:36 AM

hmmmmmm...i gotta show this to my...you-know-who....loved it, Marge...thank you...

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

16 posted 2002-01-17 10:41 AM

liked it

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

17 posted 2002-01-17 11:13 AM

This love looks beautiful on you Margie girl......wonderful write.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

18 posted 2002-01-17 11:27 AM

Wow.Standing ovation.

I love the picture and your words.Wish I could write in depth like you.You are awesome.
Peaches

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

19 posted 2002-01-17 04:52 PM

Always a pleasure
how your words touch others

Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

20 posted 2002-01-17 05:00 PM

Just had to pop in, can't stay away too long from your poems sweetie.

I can see love suits you very well and it brings beautiful poetry to our eyes.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just send me a mail and I'll give you the link.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

21 posted 2002-01-17 06:19 PM

Oh Marge, How very very lovely this is, floria

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

22 posted 2002-01-18 10:00 AM

I wanta be able to write a poem like this... though if I was ever so blessed to know such bliss, I'd probably sit around with a silly grin on my face and not one coherent thought! LOL

This is beautiful, Marge!

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

23 posted 2002-01-18 10:03 AM

and, THUNDERING applause.
Ain't love grand

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

24 posted 2002-01-18 11:35 AM

Marge~

This love looks great on you....

HUGS....

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-18-2002 11:36 AM).]

Loneheart
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since 1999-09-13

Posts 92
Eastern US

25 posted 2002-01-19 03:18 AM

Margie my friend of days gone past
I see a great Knight has finely captured
Thy heart at last
Many happy days unto thee and thy kind Knight
Sweet maid I love your work as always
This read is truly beautiful
Though I post not many these days we now are in
I still stop in from time to time
To drink my fill of all the beauty
Within this place

If ones cup should be filled til it runneth over
and there be no vessel to catch the precious
contents there of then it will be lost.
Lonehear

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

26 posted 2002-01-19 03:50 AM

teehee..MARGIE youre like a little school girl.....

your heart is overflowing right into the blue!

enjoying your love coaster...

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

[he] comes to me when i'm feelin' down..inspires me without a sound..[he] touches me... -b joel

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

27 posted 2002-01-19 01:02 PM

Very lovely, Marge!

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

28 posted 2002-01-19 02:02 PM

Marge....FANTASTIC POEM!!!!! Beautifully romantic; yet so soul-stirring with beautiful, poetic language. LOVED THIS!!!!

***Ivy Rose

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

29 posted 2002-01-20 03:51 PM

Hmmm now, Little Goose. Sounds like a wonderful way to start your day off...ahh, from the heart, no less....very gentle smile

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

30 posted 2002-01-20 04:59 PM

ohhhhhh Marge sooooo good to see you glow from love....may love always touch your mornings my dear friend

((hugs))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

31 posted 2002-01-20 05:11 PM

Now this is the kind of wake up call I would like!! Lucky you, and lucky him. Love is a wonderful thing.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

32 posted 2002-01-22 03:39 AM

Amigo~
I hope 'you-know-who' liked it too ... thank you, my friend~

VanDana~
Thanks so much~

GentleSpirit~
I appreciate that !

Peaches~
Awwwww ... just pen your heart, sweetie~
That's all I do ... thank you~

LadyOllyne~
Thank you ... it's my 'day-job'~

Titia~
Ohhhhh ... I just love seeing you, sweet friend~

Strbbux~
I so appreciate your replies~

SuthernGal~
LOL@ the *silly grin*
You peeking in my mirror, gal~
I love ya'~

InterLoper~
Yeah ! It's that alright~
Thank you~

GreenEyes~
Oh ... I'd have to 'fess up' ... It feels great too~
Thank you, hon~

LoneHeart~
Dear friend ... it is SO GOOD TO SEE YOU~
Yes ... me little heart is under seige ...
I threw in the towel about 40 poems back~
Thank you for stopping in .. you're missed~

DG~
You can say that again~
I'm pure mush~

Denise~
Thank you sweet friend ... I miss you~

IvyRose~
Thank you ever so much~

Logan~
Ahhhhh ... with a *gentle hug* this ~*LittleGoose*~ thanks you~

Charisma~
Thank you for your sweet blessings~

Tracey~
We both are counting our blessings~
Thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (01-22-2002 10:33 AM).]

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

33 posted 2002-01-22 03:16 PM

Oh yes..this is lovely! I adore this..although I cannot relate (being a huge grump when morning comes).

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

34 posted 2002-01-22 03:26 PM

TemptyOne~
Tee-Hee ... I 'thought' I was a 'grouch' too~
But ... this tender man has stirred my awakening into morning ...
so gently ... that it's pure pleasure to wake up to his day~

Thanks for the read, sweetie~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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