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Coral Reef Dreaming
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Coral Reef Dreaming |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Coral Reef Dreaming By: Noah Eaton 1/16/02 Sail away with me, sweet love Into the heart of our great barrier reef We will find worlds we have never dreamed of Flowing through currents of eternity Violet embers fill your pastel blue glass space Polyps of dreams floating about, weaving lovers pearls Flourescent jellyfish and crystal starfish decorate our place You make the oceans of my heart a paradise, you are my mermaid girl Your heart is the rose of my sea You are the Spanish dancer, swaying seductively Billowing all of the soft spaces of my sanctuary Like an angel-fish, weaving halos so lovingly Streamers shoot out as you embrace me In my rainbow-bleached ocean of romance Congregating matrimony in spirit, a birth of felicity Swimming away, hand in hand, in marriages dance Sail away with me, sweet darling Show me the colors of your dreams You will always be my heavenly mermaid Kissing your soft luscious lips, together coral reef dreaming… [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-16-2002 03:22 PM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
i'm blown away by this beautiful piece! I will be your mermaid and we can enjoy ourselves under the sea!!  RP |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* as brilliantly beautiful as the colors of coral...Stunning, Noah, and filled with romance. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Lovely images, Noah. Romance filled lines. May you find your sea nymph. Cheryl [This message has been edited by His Poet (01-16-2002 03:52 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this Noah...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Noah, you are so romantic and your descriptions so beautiful! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Noah, this is wonderful poetry. Thanks for sharing. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Noah! Enjoyed this sweetie. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now listen, how did you Noah that I was preparing a lesson on Oceanography? Your poem is much more fun than the lesson! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah I have been fortunate enough to have been to the Great Barrier Reef here in Australia and even though I was only quite young the beautiful images of the reef have stayed with me and your words just helped me relive my experience. The Great Barrier Reef is one of the main reasons we are called "the lucky country" I believe. We have many beautiful places in our wide brown land and if ever you journey this far Noah, I'd love to show you around. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Noah, you never fail to be impressive.... |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Fess up Noah, did you write this before or after you read my poem "Naked Nymphs"... 'Cause I'd be glad to take credit for lending some inspiration to this fine piece of poetry...lol. Either way, this was just stunning, my dear! |
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