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N orth Carolina Girl
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0 posted 2002-01-16 01:20 PM


You call me names and laugh at me.
But when you`re in need I`m who you come and see.

Its not my fault I`m here for one thing.
But sometimes when you`re here I can here you sing.

You bring your magazines and sit for awhile.
When you leave you`re wearing a feel better smile.

You`ll always need me there ain`t no doubt.
You just have to see me to let everything out.

I`ll always be here as quiet as a mouse.
I`m your bathroom but was once called an outhouse.




Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

© Copyright 2002 Juanita - All Rights Reserved
Victoria
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1 posted 2002-01-16 01:22 PM


a unique poem indeed ha..love your cute little cartoons..

             ~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

strbbux
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2 posted 2002-01-16 01:32 PM


HAHAH I love this N Carolina thinking of a tune " thats what friends are for, thats what friends are for"  I enjoyed this. floria
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2002-01-16 01:40 PM


I know this feeling

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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4 posted 2002-01-16 02:00 PM


Thats the power of friendship sometimes, where just your presence will heal their problems.  Nicely written!

    Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-01-16 02:05 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, I know this feeling ever so much myself; sometimes I just don't feel like being in the company of others, and people can hurt me, but nevertheless through time they seem to find more respect and I feel comfortable being not alone. (sigh) You are what you are, sweet friend, a very loving person with a big golden heart of love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Juanita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Ariana
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6 posted 2002-01-16 02:25 PM


Hey Girl:

"I`m your bathroom but was once called an outhouse"

Love it - uniquely different.  You certainly have a way of making everyone smile.  

Startime
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7 posted 2002-01-16 02:40 PM


*giggling with delight* I love it...simply a delight to read....sure put a laughing smile on my face. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

True Reflections
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8 posted 2002-01-16 02:42 PM


Juanita,
It takes a real woman to write potty poetry. I'm very turned on right now. Hold me.

Roger

jwesley
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9 posted 2002-01-16 02:42 PM


Neat write - love the cartoons - me, I'm still the outhouse..., how did you make it to bathroom status (my ambition--hee, hee).

jwesley

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10 posted 2002-01-16 02:48 PM


Juanita, Only you could write a toilet tribute with such class. I'm laughing as I type. This was so cute. Way to go. Cheryl
N orth Carolina Girl
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11 posted 2002-01-16 03:09 PM


Victoria,thanks for reading my silly poems.I`m glad you like the cartoons.





Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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12 posted 2002-01-16 03:11 PM


Floria,thank you I`m glad if this gave you a smile.





Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

RosePetal
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13 posted 2002-01-16 03:12 PM


I like this too...there are some clever lines in this poem. (hugs)

RP

N orth Carolina Girl
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14 posted 2002-01-16 03:14 PM


Kay,thanks for reading!




Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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15 posted 2002-01-16 04:03 PM


Randy,thanks so much for reading this,I really appreciate it.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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16 posted 2002-01-16 04:05 PM


Noah,you are just too sweet.Thank you so much!


Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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17 posted 2002-01-16 04:09 PM


Ariana,thank you for the kind words.I can always use a good smile myself.




Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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18 posted 2002-01-16 04:24 PM


Karen,I`m so glad you liked this.I smiled the entire time I was writing it.




Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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19 posted 2002-01-16 04:36 PM


Roger,so thats what makes me a lady?If I was there with you I would hold you so tight.:squeeze.






Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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20 posted 2002-01-16 04:41 PM


jwesley,it took a while to work up to a bathroom.I`m glad you like the cartoons,I enjoy putting them on here.





Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Pilgrimage
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21 posted 2002-01-16 04:41 PM


Dear Juanita,
Only you would write an ode to an outhouse. Loved your cartoons. You do them really well.

Nan

True Reflections
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22 posted 2002-01-16 04:41 PM


Juanita,
Hugging me would be easy to do. While pot-sitting I always put my arms straight out sideways in case I fall in. This would prevent me going in above my shoulders. One can never be too careful. It's hard to do the paperwork though.

Roger

Canuckster
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23 posted 2002-01-16 04:44 PM


Cute poem with a real "clincher" at the end (no "bun" intended) .....


N orth Carolina Girl
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24 posted 2002-01-16 04:45 PM


Cheryl,is my southern roots showing?






Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

sodpossom
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25 posted 2002-01-16 04:54 PM


Mama

This was funny.I have toilet envy now.

Suetang
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26 posted 2002-01-16 04:55 PM


This was an absolute classic! So very comical and so very much enjoyed by this reader. Take care......Sue

Suetang

Madame Chipmunk
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27 posted 2002-01-17 12:08 PM


This one has me laughing so hard that I will have to pay you a visit or I will wet my pants, Juanita.........
A real beauty of a down home poem...
Great job!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Bill Charles
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28 posted 2002-01-17 12:10 PM


North Carolina Girl - now I've been saying that no one writes them like a girl from north carolina...

BC

N orth Carolina Girl
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29 posted 2002-01-17 11:10 AM


RosePetal,I`m glad you liked this.





Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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30 posted 2002-01-17 11:12 AM


Roger,honey I would never let you fall in.





Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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31 posted 2002-01-17 11:15 AM


Nan,my dear friend you know I`m a little strange.



Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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32 posted 2002-01-17 11:17 AM


Bartin,thanks for reading this I appreciate it.




Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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33 posted 2002-01-17 11:21 AM


Stevie,I knew I`d do a poem that you would be envious over.


Love,
Mama


N orth Carolina Girl
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34 posted 2002-01-17 11:24 AM


Sue,thank you!



Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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35 posted 2002-01-17 11:26 AM


Lyra,I`m so glad this gave you a smile.I guess you can tell I`m southern born and southern bred.TAKE CARE!





Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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36 posted 2002-01-17 11:29 AM


Bill,I guess my NC blood shines through.Thanks friend!






Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

peaches73533
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37 posted 2002-01-17 12:01 PM


I love the way you toyed with this and enjoyed it very much.
Peaches

Silver Streak
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38 posted 2002-01-17 12:04 PM


Priceless!

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

N orth Carolina Girl
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39 posted 2002-01-17 01:53 PM


Peaches,thank you so much!



Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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40 posted 2002-01-17 01:55 PM


Newel,thanks for reading.


Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

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