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Ocelot
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since 2002-01-07
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Texas

0 posted 2002-01-16 10:29 AM


New Life
*~*
Saying goodbye,
Isn't what I pictured it'd be,
Maybe cuz I never thought,

That you'd go,
That you'd leave, me,
Leave me here,

But I,
Know that you're better off,
And I,
Know that the time has come,
For you,
To up and take flight,
Into life,
Only I never thought it would be this hard for me,

Look at you now,
How you've taken on,
The light of something beautiful,

And when you go,
I know I'll cry,
But it's all in joy, for you,

Sometimes I wish,
That I'd never met you,
Never cared,

If only I had, more,
Time to watch you,
Grow and learn,

But I've realized,
That its time,
For you now,

Only Time,
Will tell the tale,
Tell me how you're doin now,

Maybe someday,
We can meet,
Look at who we've become,
Only I never thought it would be this hard for me,

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Morcastlin
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since 2002-01-14
Posts 244
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1 posted 2002-01-16 10:46 AM


I understand this feeling very well. It is so bittersweet. I like the style of it too, went very well with how and what you were saying it! Bravo!

*~Mor~*

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2 posted 2002-01-16 11:25 AM




(sigh) Sooooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope you can both find true happiness on your own then come and have a reunion later on and celebrate together true found joy! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this was beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Ocelot, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-16 11:26 AM


This is very sad Ocelot and you expressed it well. floria
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