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Razor Beaks
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Razor Beaks |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Scarecrow, a straw body. Ragged clothes. Slumped, hung on wooden beams. A movement never. Razor beaks peck, peck, peck at your empty eyes. Scarecrow, sad and knotty. No one knows. Slumped shoulders, the unachieved dreams. So silent ever. Razor beaks peck, peck, peck at your broken heart. Scarecrow, old and shoddy. Nothing grows. Slumped, those tears create streams. All numb forever. Razor beaks peck, peck, peck at your lonely soul. Oh, how those razor beaks keep pecking! Copyright ©2002 Bonnie Burns Hayes -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
I sometimes feel like this scarecrow, when some things go wrong for me, they start to pile up and it gets more and more painful, people are getting on my nerves and aahh!! Well im glad im not going through it now!lol! This was a good write I like the razor beaks. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) So very sad but well-written, sweet friend, I know these feelings all too well, but I believe as long as we embrace His love and smile, we can more be like the bird that befriends the scarecrow through time! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very interesting write Morc, enjoyable read. floria |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Interesting way to put the feelings expressed here. A sacrecrow was such a perfect choice. |
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