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J. K. Mitchell
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0 posted 2002-01-16 09:25 AM


My mission is to secure your heart
To take your fantasies
And make them reality
I am the Thief of Hearts

You are a King
And my body is your empire
Feel free my liege, to explore every nook and cranny of your Kingdom
Behold the Thief of Hearts

You are the Master
And I am a slave of your desire
Tied in passion's bonds
Wanting only to please
To anticipate your needs
Fly away with the Thief of Hearts

© Copyright 2002 Jacqueline Mitchell - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-01-16 09:30 AM


But before you fly check the credentials, sorry couldn't help that. Enjoyed the read.
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2 posted 2002-01-16 09:41 AM


I love the damsel and knight feelings I get from this. Passionate words with an old world feel. Nicely done. Cheryl
Morcastlin
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3 posted 2002-01-16 10:54 AM


The passion, the desire, and the implied sensuality was great to behold in this! A wonderful, romantic poem! Bravo!
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4 posted 2002-01-16 11:11 AM




(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are the princess of his heart and you will always take his breath away with your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet J.K, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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5 posted 2002-01-16 11:27 AM


I like this idea" thief of hearts" nice and imaginative, floria
Irish Rose
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6 posted 2002-01-16 01:13 PM


well, I owe you an apology!  

I thought you were a man!!!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Startime
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7 posted 2002-01-16 03:12 PM


Sensual passion at it's very best....I love the way this heats up the page. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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