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D.Lester Young
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0 posted 2002-01-16 06:26 AM


It is about the awakening of the poetic spirit within us.


Awake poetic morning
Start the day off right
Let the heart that lies within
Spread its arms of warmth

Bless this land in magic highlights
Creating the thoughts to float
Along the awakening mists
To evaporate into heavens sky

Let the colors explode into our vision
Creating the images that smile
Within our soul in such power
Words storm out in passion
Which will make love with our surroundings

Carry the winds of nature’s chorus
With birds singing among the branches
To then take flight over us
Floating among the currents of our mind
Creating the verses to remember
The awakening within us

D.Lester Young (01/16/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)


© Copyright 2002 David Lester Young - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-16 08:48 AM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is a glorious vision of awakening to the beauty of poetry! May we all spread our wings like a bird and soar through our imaginations happily! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! YAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lester, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-16 11:59 AM


D.LesterYoung~

'Words storm out in passion
Which will make love with our surroundings'

'Creating the verses to remember
The awakening within us'


Oh ... I have known such mornings~
Thanking you for this lovely piece~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Startime
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3 posted 2002-01-16 12:44 PM


Now this is my kind of morning...awakening with the passion of words flowing through my mind. BRAVO!!! I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

His Poet
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4 posted 2002-01-16 12:50 PM


Lester, what a nice way to start the day. Most of my thoughts come when I'm supposed to be sleeping. I'll take them whenever them come. Enjoyed. Cheryl
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5 posted 2002-01-16 12:51 PM


Very creative indeed..beautifully written

                    ~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

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