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OWG
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0 posted 01-16-2002 05:44 AM       View Profile for OWG   Email OWG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit OWG's Home Page   View IP for OWG


the oaks wear her perfume
on their leaf fingers
she danced with them
while her cloud friends
distracted a round eyed moon

she whispered mist words
and left notes on the sidewalk
for the tree people to follow
when she left them with morning
and her indigo gown sky

she kissed their root toes
and the inside of their branches
she messed up their grass hair
and their innocent trickle mouths
she left their beds disrupted

they made wet mud noises
when she returned for a moment
from the dry door of day
they will make their beds later
in spring with new flowers

OWG 2002
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1 posted 01-16-2002 06:05 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Wow OWG, such cool images and analagy this morning.  Enjoyed it much big guy.  peace.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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Thanx GS....just one of those misty mornings..hugs lady..
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3 posted 01-16-2002 09:47 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

it's foggy up here this morning....


I love the way you described the morning...it is the best time of day for me....
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OWG, Lovely imagery in your words. Makes morning a pleasure. Cheryl
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5 posted 01-16-2002 10:22 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

What we all see through those OWG eyes.....the softer and the darker of how the raven flies.... lovely.....

Lauren~


Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

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SEA  Thank you lil' lady..morning is the best...it is misty and subtle fog shapes this am..the Oaks seemed to have secrets when I walked by them.
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His Poet

Thank you for your visit and review..I appreciate you.
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You have such for talent for combining the elements of nature and tranforming the images so they come alive.  
I never tire of your snap shots.  I especially liked this.

they will make their beds later
in spring with new flowers

That's a comfy thought if I ever heard one~

Good morning to you sir.
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Green Eyed Lady...always a blessing to receive your visits...thank you for watching
the raven fly..
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Blues Serenade, humble thanks for your review and gentle comments.  So pleased you enjoyed the images.
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(smiles) Oh my gosh, it's foggy here too right now, and it's beginning to flurry! (big hugggssssss) Such a beautiful view of natures heavenliness, sweet friend, soon the dew will kiss the grass and the flowers will bloom as spring comes in! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet OWG, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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OWG this is so beautiful and I love the title. floria
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Noah
thanx amigo for your reviews and replies..it is a blessing to receive them both

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strbbux;

thanks for your words, so pleased that the verse was to your liking
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she whispered mist words
and left notes on the sidewalk
for the tree people to follow
when she left them with morning
and her indigo gown sky

~*~

Yes....
 
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