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OWG
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 155
California

0 posted 2002-01-16 05:44 AM

the oaks wear her perfume
on their leaf fingers
she danced with them
while her cloud friends
distracted a round eyed moon

she whispered mist words
and left notes on the sidewalk
for the tree people to follow
when she left them with morning
and her indigo gown sky

she kissed their root toes
and the inside of their branches
she messed up their grass hair
and their innocent trickle mouths
she left their beds disrupted

they made wet mud noises
when she returned for a moment
from the dry door of day
they will make their beds later
in spring with new flowers

©OWG 2002

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-01-16 06:05 AM

Wow OWG, such cool images and analagy this morning. Enjoyed it much big guy. peace.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

OWG
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 155
California

2 posted 2002-01-16 08:04 AM

Thanx GS....just one of those misty mornings..hugs lady..

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2002-01-16 09:47 AM

it's foggy up here this morning....

I love the way you described the morning...it is the best time of day for me....

His Poet
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since 2001-12-18

Posts 750

4 posted 2002-01-16 10:02 AM

OWG, Lovely imagery in your words. Makes morning a pleasure. Cheryl

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2002-01-16 10:22 AM

What we all see through those OWG eyes.....the softer and the darker of how the raven flies....

lovely.....

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-16-2002 10:22 AM).]

OWG
Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 155
California

6 posted 2002-01-16 10:22 AM

SEA Thank you lil' lady..morning is the best...it is misty and subtle fog shapes this am..the Oaks seemed to have secrets when I walked by them.

OWG
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 155
California

7 posted 2002-01-16 10:23 AM

His Poet

Thank you for your visit and review..I appreciate you.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2002-01-16 10:24 AM

You have such for talent for combining the elements of nature and tranforming the images so they come alive.
I never tire of your snap shots. I especially liked this.

they will make their beds later
in spring with new flowers

That's a comfy thought if I ever heard one~

Good morning to you sir.

OWG
Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 155
California

9 posted 2002-01-16 10:24 AM

Green Eyed Lady...always a blessing to receive your visits...thank you for watching
the raven fly..

OWG
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 155
California

10 posted 2002-01-16 10:27 AM

Blues Serenade, humble thanks for your review and gentle comments. So pleased you enjoyed the images.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2002-01-16 11:21 AM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, it's foggy here too right now, and it's beginning to flurry! (big hugggssssss) Such a beautiful view of natures heavenliness, sweet friend, soon the dew will kiss the grass and the flowers will bloom as spring comes in! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet OWG, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

12 posted 2002-01-16 11:24 AM

OWG this is so beautiful and I love the title. floria

OWG
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 155
California

13 posted 2002-01-16 12:11 PM

Noah
thanx amigo for your reviews and replies..it is a blessing to receive them both

OWG
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 155
California

14 posted 2002-01-16 12:12 PM

strbbux;

thanks for your words, so pleased that the verse was to your liking

Soleil Noir
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

15 posted 2004-06-16 09:17 AM

she whispered mist words
and left notes on the sidewalk
for the tree people to follow
when she left them with morning
and her indigo gown sky

~*~

Yes....

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