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craigrk
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since 2001-12-23
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0 posted 2002-01-16 03:51 AM



It wasn’t
the slut curl
or up-shot
thigh slide
that steeled me,

but the staccato
rub-bounced
knees as I
leaned in from
the ticket taker.

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1 posted 2002-01-16 04:10 AM


YES!!! THATA WAY!!!!!
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