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Ven
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0 posted 2002-01-16 03:04 AM



The Life Way Code.

When approaching life's main junctions.
Reduce your speed.
Look to the right ...
and the wrong.

After making your choice,
be sure to indicate,
Thus making other life users,
aware of your intentions.

And remember if,
its all moving to quickly,
you can always pull over ,
in a safe place and wait,

until the road ahead,
is less congested.

by Ven.

© Copyright 2002 Lorraine Voss - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-16 12:20 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, how did this ever come down to the third page with no comment, this is filled with such wisdom and love from your heart! (big hugggssssss) Yes, at every major intersection of our hearts, may we take our time and find the junction that leads to joy and righteousness, and we will find love and peace! (kiss on cheek) So well-said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! Now back on top you go!!! YAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lorraine, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-16-2002 12:21 PM).]

Startime
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2 posted 2002-01-16 12:33 PM


Oh WOW!!!Does this ever make sense to me. I am at the pull over stage right now. BRAVO!!!A masterpiece. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Ven
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3 posted 2002-01-16 12:53 PM


Thanks both,
I really thought this one was going to just fall right off the board without a single reply.
I was very unsure about it and its still unfinished. I've just written two more stanza's but I'm still not really happy with it. I think the idea is worth  expanding on though, so I'll keep going back to it until I get it right  
If anyone has any suggestions I'd be happy to hear them.
Many thanks,
Ven.

[This message has been edited by Ven (01-16-2002 12:55 PM).]

strbbux
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4 posted 2002-01-16 01:49 PM


HAHAH this is so superb Ven.. great write. floria
Irish Rose
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5 posted 2002-01-16 02:25 PM


My problem is I have a lead foot

But, seriously, this shouldn't fall off so quickly, you are definitely
headed in the right direction.

Which reminds me, I need to get out and do some
driving.

ENjoyed.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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6 posted 2002-01-17 05:39 AM


On life and traffic...who could ask for more
Well done!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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