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poetryinmotion
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0 posted 2002-01-16 12:43 PM

hello everyone. i have a painting of an old farm house. here is how i think the family lived in this old house. hope you like it.

the farm house stands upon a hill,
it's old and tattered I see,
what use to be a place called home,
is just a memory.
mother raised eight children there,
life was hard back then,
but that old farm house kept them warm,
for a hard working family of ten.
they all got up at 4 a.m.,
to do their chores and such,
the cold wind made their faces freeze,
but it didn't bother them much.
papa was always chopping wood,
to keep the family warm,
and that old wind would howl outside,
kicking up a storm.
the kids always slept four in a bed,
one blanket was all they had,
but they never complained about a thing,
because their faith over came the bad.
mother would wash the wooden floors,
with a scrub brush, down on her knees,
and the kids would always play outside,
climbing the apple trees.
papa and moma both passed on,
and the kids are all grown too,
but they'll never forget that old farm house,
that saw a family through.

ecrivan
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1 posted 2002-01-16 12:51 PM

I guess it's the wholesomeness of this painted picture of words that makes old farm houses so appealing to me and to many

Nice write and welcome to Passions

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-16-2002 12:51 AM).]

Startime
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2 posted 2002-01-16 01:03 AM

*sigh* gosh this is such a perfect vision...I absolutely love it...You can stay forever and give me visions like this every day and I would never get tired of them. Welcome to Passions...I can see I am going to love reading your poems...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-01-16 01:04 AM

poetryinmotion - welcome to Passions. I love this writing you've done. 'The Old Farm House', you bring it out in words so that it feels so very real in front of me. Wonderful write, hope to see more of yours..

BC

poetryinmotion
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4 posted 2002-01-16 01:09 AM

hi Ecrivan. thank you for the warm welcome. glad you liked my poem. it means so much to me. love Alice

poetryinmotion
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5 posted 2002-01-16 01:12 AM

hi Startime. thank you so much for reading my poem. old farm houses are great to look at and to write about. love Alice

poetryinmotion
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6 posted 2002-01-16 01:13 AM

hi Bill. thank you so much for reading my poem. glad you liked it. love Alice

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7 posted 2002-01-16 01:34 AM

Like it? No. I absolutely love it! Welcome to the blue pages, where you may write your heart and soul, and have many who will thank you for sharing. WELCOME!

Mysteria

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8 posted 2002-01-16 03:44 AM

Welcome to Passions and you can pen me a picture any day you wish, pen on!

~* CARPE' DIEM *~

Sunshine

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9 posted 2002-01-16 07:05 AM

I am going to like your descriptive qualities in your writing. Welcome to Passions! Please check your E-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
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Dee
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10 posted 2002-01-16 07:36 AM

Welcome! Welcome! Welcome!
It is nice to see the different ways everyone here writes and yours will be a welcome addition to the family.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Sunset
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11 posted 2002-01-16 07:40 AM

Welcome! Vivid pictures throughout this. Very well done. Will look forward to reading more from you.

Mistletoe Angel

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12 posted 2002-01-16 08:42 AM

YAY!!! WHAT A BEAUTIFUL DEBUT, SWEET FRIEND, I LOVE IT!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) You paint such gorgeous visions and emotions with your beautiful words; this is a beautiful perspective of this gorgeous painting! I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Alice, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alice, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

sodpossom
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13 posted 2002-01-16 08:46 AM

You took us for a visit inside that painting.Very nice!

Alan
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14 posted 2002-01-16 08:46 AM

Alice, Welcome to Passions.. These is an outstanding start to what I hope is a long term stay. This poem/picture is perfect. Being raised on a farm it is very special to me. I love this.
alan

Enchantress
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15 posted 2002-01-16 09:02 AM

Very Beautifully Painted First Post!
I look forward to more of your work!
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Marge Tindal

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16 posted 2002-01-16 11:45 AM

PoetryInMotion~
The ability to step into a picture is a unique gift~
Thank you so much for sharing with us~

Welcome to the circle of friendship and poetry~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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poetryinmotion
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17 posted 2002-01-16 07:50 PM

thank you so much Midnitesun for your lovely words. they mean so much to me. love ya. Alice

poetryinmotion
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18 posted 2002-01-16 07:52 PM

HI Mysteria thank you for reading my poem. i am so glad you liked it. love Alice

poetryinmotion
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19 posted 2002-01-16 07:53 PM

hi sweet Sunshine. thank you so much for reading my poem. i am so glad you liked it. it means so much to me. love Alice

poetryinmotion
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20 posted 2002-01-16 07:54 PM

hello Dee. i am so glad you read my poem. i am glad you liked it. thank you so very much. love Alice

poetryinmotion
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21 posted 2002-01-16 07:56 PM

hello Sunset6. thank you so much for reading my poem. glad you liked it. love Alice

poetryinmotion
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22 posted 2002-01-16 07:57 PM

hi Mistletoe Angel. thank you so much for reading my poem. oh by the way i love your name. love Alice

poetryinmotion
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23 posted 2002-01-16 07:58 PM

hi sodpossom. i am so glad you liked my poem. thank you for reading it. love Alice

poetryinmotion
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24 posted 2002-01-16 07:59 PM

hi Alan. i am so glad you liked my poem. it means so much to me. love Alice

poetryinmotion
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25 posted 2002-01-16 08:01 PM

hello Enchantress. thank you so much for reading my poem. you all seem to be a great bunch of poets. love Alice

poetryinmotion
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26 posted 2002-01-16 08:02 PM

hi Marge Tindal thank you so much for reading my poem. you put a smile on my face. love Alice

RosePetal

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27 posted 2002-01-16 08:07 PM

What a lovely first post! I will keep my eye out for more of your poetry

I hope you enjoy it here

RP

Irish Rose
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28 posted 2002-01-16 08:19 PM

Welcome to Passions, I would LOVE
to have a farm house but don't know
if I would have the energy to keep it up.
You'll enjoy it here. Everyone is friendly.
It's a Circle of Friends.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Elizabeth

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29 posted 2002-01-16 08:36 PM

This brings to mind a calming scene with a homey feel to it. Beautifully done.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

poetryinmotion
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30 posted 2002-01-16 08:36 PM

hello Rosepetal. thank you so much for your wonderful words. glad you liked my poem. love Alice

poetryinmotion
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31 posted 2002-01-16 08:39 PM

hi Irish Rose i am so glad you liked my poem. i would love to buy an old farm house and fix it up. maybe some day. from one Irish girl to another may i say thank you so much. love Alice

poetryinmotion
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32 posted 2002-01-16 08:41 PM

hello Elizabeth. thank you so much for reading my poem. it means so much to me. love Alice

Suetang
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33 posted 2002-01-16 10:37 PM

Hello Alice
Your words literally moved me to tears as I remembered my father describing life on the farm in his homeland of Sweden, just as you have done here. So vivid was the picture you portrayed through your wonderful words and how glad I am that I found this treasured piece of writing. Thank you so much for bringing back some special memories for me. Take care.......Sue

Suetang

Martie

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34 posted 2002-01-16 10:50 PM

Welcome to passions...what a charming picture it must be...for you have painted it into my heart...thank you!

poetryinmotion
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35 posted 2002-01-16 10:51 PM

hi Sue. i am so glad you liked my poem. glad i could bring back memories for you. love Alice

poetryinmotion
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36 posted 2002-01-16 10:58 PM

hi Martie. i am so glad you liked my poem. it means so much to me. love Alice

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37 posted 2002-01-16 11:00 PM

Hi Alice!

One of your finest, dear sis.

So glad you're a smashing hit, here! Isn't it nice to have so many warm loving souls to write for? And I believe that most of the poets here are Christians, just bursting with God's love. Thanks for coming over, sis.
-bro

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Morcastlin
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38 posted 2002-01-16 11:04 PM

Welcome to passions!!! I'm pretty new here too! So don't feel alone. ;o) Us newbies will keep 'em on their toes...lol. Just kidding all. ;o) I loved this poem, it had such wonderful detail and imagery!!!! Bravo!!!

Love,
Bonnie

poetryinmotion
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39 posted 2002-01-16 11:18 PM

hi bro. yes it is wonderful over here. you are right. thank you for telling me about this site. and thank you for reading my poem. love ya. sis

poetryinmotion
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40 posted 2002-01-16 11:20 PM

hi Bonnie. welcome to passions. isn't this a great site? thank you for reading my poem. i will be looking forward to reading your poems also. love Alice

D.Lester Young
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41 posted 2002-01-17 12:02 PM

Very good images goes into the mind and flows with the words creating something you can relate to.

poetryinmotion
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42 posted 2002-01-17 12:14 PM

thank you so much D. for your kind words. love Alice

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