Dear Jackie (No person intended)

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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-01-16 12:08 PM

Dear Jackie

I wanted, months ago..before you left my life,
to tell you how my sun rose over you each day.
How complete I felt within your web of love.
That I adored each moment we had those years.
And...that I will not erase those memories, ever.

You were an unending breath of spring to me.
Passionate summer nights consumed us both.
Our swims beneath the stars, bare to the air.
Me, wagging as I ran, making you giggle.

Firelight kisses as wood popped, scaring you.
Carrying you upstairs, the kiss that lasted.
Your shimmering eyes as I lay you on the bed.
The look that said NOW...I want you NOW.

Breakfast at noon, sleeping in after those moments.
Eternal moments of joy, ecstacy, passion flowing.
Sighs that echoed off the walls, the sheets flying.
Your shudders, my own mixing, teeth gritting.
Now gone, but still here in my thoughts.

How could I ever forget this, I dream of it now.
You are my dreams, my life, my existence.
I want you there always, as it will be.
Even though you are there, you remain here.

Here among the stars of my night.
The sun that warms my waking day
The breeze that flows over the land, my face.
The earth, where all I have...is forever yours.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-01-16 12:13 PM

oh my...this poem absolutely sizzels with passion. She is one very lucky lady to have created such lasting and burning memories...hot hot hot...now go and let Lou have all that heat that is flowing our of you. *wicked grin***big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-01-16 12:16 PM

Magnus - a most beautiful love story, and you tell them well...

BC

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

3 posted 2002-01-16 12:33 PM

Magnus...Truly a declaration of true love in this poem. So simply; but beautfully stated. What was is never lost. We keep it inside stored away...to be remembered on some lonely day. ***Ivy Rose

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-16 08:53 AM

(smiles) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you always have such beautiful romantic tales to tell, this is such a beautiful love story! (sigh) The love of your life would be so happy to live this story you write like a neverending real movie of true love! (big hugggssssss) I love it, sweet friedn, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunset
Member

since 2002-01-08

Posts 80

5 posted 2002-01-16 08:56 AM

There is a gift of love if one chooses to see and accept it. You write that gift so very well. My compliments, Magnus.

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

6 posted 2002-01-16 09:11 AM

Beautiful as it is sad.
Wonderful as always.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2002-01-16 09:20 AM

Magnus darling boy oh what joy it is to read your wonderful beautiful words.

This blazed with passion it’s truly superb but you know that don’t you? Of course you do. It is UTTERLY utterly fabulous as always when you shine no one shines like you do

The story was sooooooooo vivid and soooooooo beautifully told, and sad, but hopeful if you know what I mean. YOU have written a wonder here you truly have.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2002-01-16 09:26 AM

Mangus,
I believe you and I think she does too. Wonderful write.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2002-01-16 10:39 AM

Magnus~

Indeed a lovely letter....you do write nicely....peace...

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-16-2002 10:39 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2002-01-16 10:41 AM

My mother outlived my father. I think, had she taken time to pen some thoughts, she would have written this for him. She passed away four years after he did.

Her name was Jackie.

Thank you, Magnus. I am keeping this for very obvious reasons....

it touched my heart.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

11 posted 2002-01-16 11:37 AM

Magnus, this is simply wonderful, sad, but loving memories here, floria

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