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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-01-15 09:17 PM



Echo Of You


I am shameless
in my love
for you
want every thing
to know it too
I shout it
to the mountain tops
it filters to hills
and cores of rocks
all the things in
sea, earth and air
shall be an echo
of you there


"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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1 posted 2002-01-15 09:18 PM


...and I was going to depart the forum for today...oh to have missed this...that would truly have been a shame...


jwesley

Lone Wolf
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2 posted 2002-01-15 11:12 PM


Now this is how love should be, Helen. Wonderful write!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Startime
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3 posted 2002-01-15 11:15 PM


BRAVO!!! A powerful poem about declaring the love you feel to the whole world...that is what love is surely all about. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-01-15 11:18 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your heart sings with passion so heavenly in this gorgeous poem! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautiful, I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2002-01-15 11:47 PM


helen - your words always say what's inside. I read them, think about them, and enjoy what you write, as this writing.

BC

Robert A
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since 2001-10-29
Posts 174

6 posted 2002-01-16 04:01 PM


where are you? I'm on my way
what ocean is that?
sorry, got carried away, I have a lady,
just having some fun, this poetry is great,
you ladies write as beautifully as you look on screen!

Robert

vandana
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7 posted 2002-02-20 02:28 PM


enjoyed
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