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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-01-15 07:00 PM



“WALKING WITH ME”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
When I feel lonely
and down, I ask you to
walk with me, and we visit
places we have never
seen or been to before…

Sometimes we visit a
beautiful meadow, or an
elegant forest, or a
snow covered mountain,
or our favorite place,
the most serene bay
anyone has ever seen…

You stand by my side,
sharing the beauty of
of it all, my fears
disappear and I thank
you for this, but
most of all, I thank you
for walking with me…
~~~~


© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2002-01-15 07:01 PM


Peaceful, beautiful, romantic and warms the reader right to th bone!
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-01-15 07:03 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your loving heart always shines in your words and invites on walks through the most loveliest places! (smiles) I wish I had someone here who I could walk with right now, this had me daydreaming of such that feeling! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Hypnosis
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since 2001-12-02
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3 posted 2002-01-15 07:03 PM


So beautifully said Bill.  I love your trips of love.  Your true love has been found and I couldn't be more happier for you

Randy Meador




a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

[This message has been edited by Hypnosis (01-15-2002 07:04 PM).]

Magnus
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4 posted 2002-01-15 07:03 PM


Beautifully done BC...I can tell you have
been out of doors today...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-01-15 09:13 PM


Hey Bill!!  The site is back up and running...and just in time for me to tell you what a wonderfully romantic write this is!  Enjoyed so much!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
6 posted 2002-01-15 09:14 PM


Just what everyone else said Bill...beautiful write...

jwesley

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
7 posted 2002-01-15 11:06 PM


*sigh* I can see you walking along the bay looking out over the water and feeling the serenity of it all....Stunning vision that flows into me perfectly tonight. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marsha
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8 posted 2002-01-15 11:35 PM


Bill darling boy this is sooooooooo incredibly wonderful. I am never disappointed by the artistry and wonder you craft into your poems and this is amazing
What a fabulous place it is I’ve visited there via this outstanding writing the veiw was sooooooo beautiful. Thank you darling boy YOU are wonderful

You know that this is utterly wonderful don’t you, the flow is just perfect

Truly sensational writing, beauty is always welcome darling boy and YOU bring so much of it


Bravi Bravi Bravissimi


Thank you for this wonderful poem it’s utterly utterly wonderful
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


RosePetal
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9 posted 2002-01-15 11:50 PM


this is so nice...I want someone to walk with me and enjoy the scenery! Are you up for a short walk with me?

RP

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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MA, USA
10 posted 2002-01-16 12:25 PM


I couldn't think of a more pleasant walk, Bill.  To walk beside someone who enjoys the beauty all around them and who enjoys being with you. WONDERFUL POEM!!!!  ***Ivy Rose
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
11 posted 2003-03-31 11:25 PM


Lovely walk.....It's nice when someone special is walking with you!!!!  It's one of the simpliest and most wonderful treasures life can give!!!!
Bridgette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

[This message has been edited by Justbleu (03-31-2003 11:26 PM).]

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