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rosepetals25

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0 posted 2002-01-15 06:31 PM

I Wait

I wait here for you
Life’s haze settling around
Me like a soft dream
Waiting to feel your whisper
And to listen to your soul.

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home
[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (01-15-2002 06:32 PM).]

Elizabeth

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1 posted 2002-01-15 06:34 PM

Sounds like it's worth waiting for!

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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2 posted 2002-01-15 06:34 PM

(smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may the love of your life come to you and give you all your heart desires and make you happy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Hypnosis
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3 posted 2002-01-15 06:35 PM

He will be there one day for you, and also for the rest of your life. I liked your tanka!

Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

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just out of reach

4 posted 2002-01-15 06:36 PM

Soft and lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

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5 posted 2002-01-15 06:36 PM

Sweet and lovely. floria

rosepetals25

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6 posted 2002-01-15 06:42 PM

Wow! Thanks for the quick replies. I'm
glad you all enjoyed. The one I'm
waiting for is already there.
It's sometimes I miss him
like crazy. Thanks for
stopping in to read

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

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since 2001-05-15

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7 posted 2002-01-16 12:08 PM

one day?
i'm here now!!

honey, you capture snapshots of your heart with these. amazing.
of course, i'm biased.
but still.
and yes, dear, i love you right back

-Dave

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

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8 posted 2002-01-16 12:17 PM

*sigh* a tender waiting that gets rewarded for her patience..*grin* very well done....I am so glad to see him embrace you...*giggling* you two are just too cute..I LOVE THAT YOU ARE IN LOVE. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal

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9 posted 2002-01-16 12:07 PM

Tara~
This is lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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10 posted 2002-01-16 12:09 PM

Very pretty!

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Honeybee
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Ontario, CANADA

11 posted 2002-01-16 01:03 PM

Girl, you wear love so well! - and you've certaintly mastered the tanka.

This is delicately pretty~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Irish Rose
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12 posted 2002-01-16 01:19 PM

Tara, no one should keep you waiting

This is very romantic, expectant emotive verse.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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