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strbbux
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0 posted 2002-01-15 06:29 PM




The Vessel

The petals of the rose, with stamens cradled in,
Protected in the center, where life began within.
It softly cups its hands, around the center rose.
Protected from the wind, that sometimes coldly blows.

And with each passing day, the rose does open wide.
The stamens standing tall, that were hiding deep inside.
The petals growing weak , before they start to leave,
Some fall to the wayside, As all the others grieve.

While each, softly falls, their life is almost done.
They've held their heads up high, to brightly shining sun.
And now they look for shade, and darkness of the night,
Quietly they leave, Soon they'll be out of site.

Slowly stamens die, they say their last good-byes,
How lone and bare my vase, I sadly dry my eyes.
The stem now stands alone, His duty he's fulfilled,
I solemnly take the vase, out the water's spilled.

My vase now stands alone, looking barren and sad,
Waiting for fresh flowers, with many petals clad.
How empty vessel is, where heart has died this day.
And life no longer dwells, where soul has gone away.

Floria
© 2002




[This message has been edited by strbbux (01-15-2002 11:11 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-01-15 06:32 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I pray that love can again fill this vase and fill it with the water of life and purity and have the roses happily growing ever more with smiles! (big hugggsssss) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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2 posted 2002-01-15 06:35 PM


You must be reading my mind today, Floria, because I can think of
nothing else but flowers, spring and the lushness of it.  This had
such a sadness to it and yet..so much wisdom.  It reminded me of my Aunt who
for lack of a nice vase, used a Folgers can.  I'm rambling....but it so reminded me of her.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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3 posted 2002-01-15 06:39 PM


Nicely done Floria....liked the portrayal of a rose here.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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4 posted 2002-01-15 06:43 PM


Thank you Noah so much for your sweet response, floria
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5 posted 2002-01-15 06:44 PM


Thanks Irish Rose, started out with it just being about a rose, and then it turns sad. It just happens????? thanks again. floria
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6 posted 2002-01-15 06:45 PM


Thank you Elizabeth. floria
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7 posted 2002-01-16 11:56 AM


Floria, I know I responded to this yesterday but where my comments are I do not know. This is beautiful and my favorite lines are the last two. I think a lot can be read into the empty vessel that has no soul. So like the human heart that still has that void. Cheryl
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8 posted 2002-01-16 12:04 PM


Though it had a sad ending it still blooms with hope for the new blossoms to fill your vessel...and again brighten up your life. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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9 posted 2002-01-16 12:05 PM


Thank You Cheryl. I was thinking of a double meaning when I wrote this. floria
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10 posted 2002-01-16 12:06 PM


Thanks Startime, you have such a positive attitude towards life. It inspires me. floria
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