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0 posted 2002-01-15 05:33 PM



Talk me into the Night

I balk at the shadows closing in
the memories
don't walk when they come rushing in
the hurting
is chalked up to experience once again
and I know
to caulk the windows of my soul from the wind

~ * ~ * ~

so talk me into the night, my friend
walk with me in soft light, no end
of talk throughout the night to lend
a shoulder on which I might cry

hold me and hug me tonight and then
talk a little more my friend
then whisper that there shall be an end
Willow won't break, just continue to sigh

sing to me a silent song all night
and caress away all of the fright
then never again let loose of tight
just talk me into the long goodbye

just talk to me, my friend

~ * ~ * ~


8 December 2000
revised
15 January 2002


© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-15 05:37 PM


This is a beautiful poem for Mysteria, Karilea.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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2 posted 2002-01-15 05:50 PM


This is beautiful sunshine, I love it, floria
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3 posted 2002-01-15 07:03 PM


Carefully and thoughtfully crafted as usual. Very well written as usual!
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4 posted 2002-01-15 07:06 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, I just know our sweet Sharon will love this, just as I know Willow is right now smiling upon her and you, so happy to see such these lovely words written from your golden heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-01-15 07:10 PM


Lovely!

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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6 posted 2002-01-15 09:13 PM


Ah my friend, a lovely write...again

jwesley

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7 posted 2002-01-15 11:13 PM


Karilea - Great opening stanza.  It is definitely nice to have someone to talk to, to help us forget painful memories.  Very good.

Dave

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8 posted 2002-01-15 11:45 PM


Karilea, God bless you for you have indeed comforted me this night.  I have printed this out,and will whisper these words when needed, over and over again.  Thank you seems hardly enough, and I am truly humbled with this giving.
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9 posted 2002-01-15 11:51 PM


You share a true friends heart when you reach out in such a way and bring her comfort from the touch of your words. I love this poem and am greatful that it helped bring comfort to her heart like she is always giving to us all. **big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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