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Temptress
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0 posted 2002-01-15 05:15 PM


Apologies, Dear Poets. I have not been on line, and probably won't be until the 24th of this month. I feel bad about posting this without getting to respond and read to more work on here today, but it has been too darned long since I've gotten to write anything beyond things in my journal. I hope this is presentable enough. Miss you all!

Thoughts conquer my will to do anything but compose poetry
every minute.
My words have been a lover gaining strength
for as long as I have know the alluring smiles
and winks of letters for the sake of creation.
I feel the stain of strength for expressing myself
finally gracing my shy nature.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I have woke from sleep without you again.
The days have been dusted with sulight
and it glitters on winter faces frozen in smiles.
No longer does the sky weep its cold nightime tears,
and no longer do I hear your whisper.
Like love touching my life, you have also touched...
touched so much beyond the brink of me
that the spirit of love in youth has been recalled
and I am embracing the moments more often
while thinking of your smile.
I have been saying your name in my sleep,
and the kiss of your face in my dreams just
lingers and keeps me afloat in peace.
But in this peace there is also the turmoil of missing you.
One day I will reap the rewards
of how much I have to miss you now
one day
I'll silence my doubts in the arms of your heart
and in the soft subtle waves of your life.

[This message has been edited by Temptress (01-15-2002 05:19 PM).]

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Canuckster
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1 posted 2002-01-15 05:27 PM


very deep.  MAture and touching works indeed.
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-01-15 05:53 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we've all missed you and your gorgeous words so much! (kiss on cheek) You always write loves beauty so wonderfully, may you forever lie in his arms and be cradled on the waves of happiness and beauty forever and ever! We all love you so much, sweet friend, we all miss you so much but understand you've been so busy and we'll all be here for you by the 24th! God Bless You! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2002-01-15 06:46 PM


It's lovely, emotional,

have a good rest, sometimes that's needed and we will be here...

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Sven
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4 posted 2002-01-15 11:40 PM


definitely presentable enough. . .

well done my friend. . . we'll look for you to be back soon. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

RosePetal
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5 posted 2002-01-15 11:44 PM


Hey, Its nice to read you again my friend!
This is very beautiful writing.
I anxiously await your return on the 24th

RP

Startime
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6 posted 2002-01-15 11:46 PM


Sweetie you have been so missed...this is so heartachingly beautiful. I will be so glad when you can again pour your heart out upon these blue pages...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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