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Charisma
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0 posted 2002-01-15 04:39 PM


wrote this one in juny 2001, but never posted it.

*****


Sighs of Love

Within the
soothe of
your warmth
my heart
developed
showering
tenderness
'twill be a part
of your heart

When I
reached out
I found
kindness
framed by
your
loving soul

Your patience
wrapped me
in sighs
of love
and I
yes I could
breathe again
to find
myself
in you


Charisma
07/06/01


~*Theresia~*  

[This message has been edited by Charisma (01-15-2002 04:42 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2002-01-15 04:49 PM


what a lovely sigh,

where is everyone's pic going?  Is there a thief among us

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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2 posted 2002-01-15 04:52 PM


a beautiful thought Charisma..as we all find ourselves sometimes within others..

                 ~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

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3 posted 2002-01-15 04:59 PM


enjoyed
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4 posted 2002-01-15 05:01 PM


very whimsical and expressive.  A wonderful sigh indeed.
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5 posted 2002-01-15 05:04 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I'm so happy you posted this, for we would never have the chance to read this gorgeous timeless gem of your heart! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, may you forever be wrapped in his love and sigh forever in rapture! We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-01-15 11:18 PM


Stunningly beautiful, Charisma.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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7 posted 2002-01-15 11:27 PM


*sigh* oh yes...I love the gentle feel of this beautiful poem. It felt like a sigh of pure and heartfelt contentment in his love....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2002-01-15 11:51 PM


Charisma - my, my, this is stunning. This has to be the best one of yours I have read, and it's just beautiful. I humbly bow to you....

BC

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9 posted 2002-01-15 11:53 PM


Charisma,

Where did your pretty photo go?!
You know I love this, your writing is always so full of beauty.

GenXer
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10 posted 2002-01-16 12:01 PM


Charisma - Truly a splendid, romantic write.  Well done.

Dave

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11 posted 2002-01-16 12:06 PM


this is such a beautiful poem Charisma. what a nice read. well written.  grat job. love Alice
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12 posted 2002-01-16 12:04 PM


Charisma~

'When I
reached out
I found
kindness
framed by
your
loving soul'


Oh ... such a lovely, lovely thought~
And in reaching out ... what treasured souls we gather~
I love this, sweet poetess~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 2002-01-16 12:07 PM


Beautiful!

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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14 posted 2002-01-16 05:48 PM


There are indeed many sighs here, of which I have to add my own.

A wonderful poem.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

jwesley
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15 posted 2002-01-16 07:20 PM


Ah....my friend, just Ahhhh.

jwesley

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16 posted 2002-01-16 10:33 PM


deep breaths my friend. . .

this one is full of them. . . wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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17 posted 2002-01-17 11:17 PM


Enjoyed these sighs Charisma...James
Charisma
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18 posted 2002-01-18 05:00 AM


Thank you all for your wonderful and kind reply, I wish that I had more time to thank everyone by name, but do know that I truly appreciate your comments very much. Forgive me that I haven't time to reply more on yours as my time is soooooo limited at the moment


((hugs you all)

Charisma

~*Theresia~*  

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19 posted 2002-02-16 02:29 PM


*bump*
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