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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-01-15 04:33 PM



More's the pity
(feel sorry for me)
crying too pretty
to be believed.
Sometimes in the mirror
(me laughing at me)
(you've got to be kidding)
I gaze, undeceived.


The Mistress of Laughter
rebuking my fears--
laughing or crying,
I still count the tears.




© Copyright 2002 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Canuckster
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1 posted 2002-01-15 04:38 PM


This says a lot in a few lines.  It flows well and it seems to offer a very personal insight into the writer.

Good piece of writing.

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2002-01-15 04:41 PM


Thank YOU! This was just a quick toss off of me mocking me, while mocking me. If this makes sense? Seek medical attention immediately! I wanted to say thanks while I could, I am so hit and miss these days!
Janet Marie
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3 posted 2002-01-15 04:51 PM













Even thru the darkest phase, be it thick or thin
Always someone marches brave, here beneath my skin
Constant Craving ... has always been.

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (01-15-2002 04:51 PM).]

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2002-01-15 04:52 PM


Oh, Karen, I'm laughing but not at you!  I've SOUGHT medical attention
and look at me!  I'm howling at the moon and going bananas...next
I'll be eating spam!!!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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5 posted 2002-01-15 05:04 PM


Hiya, Ser! I don't have much time for reading today since I'm on borrowed computer time here. Sooo..yours is the lucky wonderful one I'm getting to read, and it was well worth it. Miss ya, Lady!
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6 posted 2002-01-15 06:27 PM


serenity, you do have a way with words. love this. floria
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7 posted 2002-01-15 06:28 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words are always so exciting to read! May you always cry in joy and laughter, for we all love you so much and the love you share with us all! I love it, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2002-01-16 12:04 PM


serenity - you do write your thoughts well. Lovely, but sad write. I send you a smile, from me to you....

BC

Startime
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9 posted 2002-01-16 12:58 PM


I like tears of laughter best of all because they seem to heal so much inside of me. **big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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