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0 posted 01-17-2002 08:28 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade


   Just before
   the man in the moon
   tipped his hat
   and bid the yawning stars
   a fond farewell,
   Just before
   the incessant sun
   stretched and made it's
   grandiose entrance
   with a radiant hello,
   You kissed me
   and the difference
   between night and day
   became
   insignificant.


                               Chris - Jan.2002

© Copyright 2002 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-17-2002 08:30 PM       View Profile for strbbux   Email strbbux   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for strbbux

Oh Chris this is sooooooooo nice. floria
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2 posted 01-17-2002 08:30 PM       View Profile for brianbeaudry   Email brianbeaudry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit brianbeaudry's Home Page   View IP for brianbeaudry

WOW!!!!!!You have just voices so much in so few words!!!Amazing post dear friend!!!
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3 posted 01-17-2002 08:37 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Thankyou Floria and Brian for reading and for your kind responses. My muse has been on holiday, and I was nervous to post - it has been a long time. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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4 posted 01-17-2002 08:52 PM       View Profile for gladiator   Email gladiator   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for gladiator

Hi Nightshade..
this is another of your beautiful words..the kiss is such a meaningful part of romance..beautiful write..
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5 posted 01-17-2002 08:53 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Sounds like a kiss to your liking...James
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6 posted 01-17-2002 08:54 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

This was very sweet. Thank you for granting a smile.

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7 posted 01-17-2002 09:00 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

gladiator - Yes, the kiss is very under rated anymore I think...and yes, it is very meaningful. thanks for your comments.

JamesMichael - Yes it was.

Alicat - Thankyou, and you are welcome to a smile anytime.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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8 posted 01-17-2002 09:08 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Nightshade - and if I kissed you under the Haunting Moon, you would have known neither day or night... A very touching write, as you can tell...

BC
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Bill - oh my, I am blushing....is there a Haunting Moon out to-night? Thankyou for your sweet reply to my offering. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Chris, this is such a beautiful kiss of true love! (smiles) May you forever feel the beauty of true love day and night with the love of your life! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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Aww sweet Noah, thankyou and I wish the same for you, thanks for reading. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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I like this very much...yes when you close your eyes and kissed by the one you love..it doesnt matter the time of day...enjoyed

           ~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

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OH, Chris, so GOOD to see you
and read your words, I could
read all day about kisses
love it!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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Victoria, Yes, that's right...time just doesn't matter. Thankyou. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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15 posted 01-17-2002 09:44 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Kay, thankyou for reading my little ditty and taking the time to comment. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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Ah, now there’s a kiss!! Aren't kisses wonderful? I can feel the magic in this one

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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17 posted 01-17-2002 10:10 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Tracey - a kiss is a magical thing. Thanks for signing. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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Hey Chris!!  Must be getting close to Valentine's Day again!  Ooooh love those kisses, don't we?  Excellent write!  You just KNOW I love this one, and you!
Hugs, Teed.



~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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NancyLee - Yes, we love candy kisses, butterfly kisses..etc. etc. I am glad you liked this one. Hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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20 posted 01-17-2002 10:27 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

It would take me more words in my reply than you used in your poem to tell you how impressive this is. The imagery based on your choice of wording is awesome and it leaves the reader with a nice warm feeling at the end...I like it!!
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21 posted 01-17-2002 10:29 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Balladeer, How kind of you. Your comments have made my night. Thankyou. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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WOW talk about making a fellas day. Paint a Mona Lisa and deliver it to him with a smile....Tell a fella this and he would take out the trash was the dishes, fold the clothes, cut the grass, and wash the windows all before he drove the kids to school.

Dan

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"You kissed me
and the difference
between night and day
became
insignificant."

Wonderful...
These words,
are the truth within
mine heart..if only one
can believe it to be so.

Lady Ollyne


"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

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I love this!  Wonderfully said!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

 
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