. . . the Love Doctor is in . . . Senryu string

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-01-15 03:36 PM

the doctor is in
list your symptoms carefully
love’s in the balance
~*~
now breathe in deeply
exhale all your fears and woes
love must be fearless
~*~
let’s recall your past
see it in ev’ry detail
now let it all go
~*~
love must be careless
not to say reckless or rash
just free from baggage
~*~
you must learn two things
accept the love given you
and reciprocate
~*~
unconditional
that describes the perfect love
no reservations
~*~
you cannot look back
nor look over your shoulder
nothing there for you
~*~
stand up straight and proud
carry yourself with great pride
look love in the eye
~*~
and when love looks back
let not your firm gaze waver
and love will be yours

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (01-16-2002 09:36 AM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-15 03:41 PM

WOW!!! Oh my gosh, Doctor Love, you are agenius, what a wonderful prescription of love your gorgeous words concoct! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, this is soooooo wonderful, the beauty of true love and faithfulness shines in your golden heart! Shall we schedule an appointment? (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Interloper, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

His Poet
Senior Member

since 2001-12-18

Posts 750

2 posted 2002-01-15 03:48 PM

I love your prescription. Strong medicine but it should cure all of love's ills. Enjoyed. Cheryl

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-01-15 03:48 PM

You're always there with just the right prescription....

Rx: Take one Interloper a day; mix with water, and relish the quench....

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2002-01-15 03:50 PM

Dear Poet, these words of wisdom will go right into my library. Wonderful as always. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-01-15 04:27 PM

Wonderful Senryu string Doc!

This one is my favourite...

unconditional
that describes the perfect love
no reservations

Well done Interloper!
~Hugs and sighs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Canuckster
Member

since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

6 posted 2002-01-15 04:30 PM

Very nicely done. The form is evident but it flows beautifully independent of that. That's so hard to do. You make it seem effortless. Good job!

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-01-15 05:59 PM

beautiful flow on this piece, Hmmm I'll take a bottle of whatever you have for my ills. floria

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

8 posted 2002-01-15 11:28 PM

Interloper - Though you seem like a good doctor, I don't think your prescription is strong enough for my ailments.lol Nicely done.

Dave

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2002-01-15 11:33 PM

Oh BRAVO!!!!STANDING OVATION!!!Only you could have written this with such perfection. I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!!MAGNIFICENT!!!**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

10 posted 2002-01-16 12:17 PM

Interloper...My friend and I were just talking about unconditional love. So, this poem struck a chord with my heart and soul. Perfect love casts out fear according to the Bible...wise words that you've accentuated in this poem. ***Ivy Rose

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

11 posted 2002-01-16 08:33 AM

And can I call you in the morning??
Seriously, this is good, some very valid points here.
Love the new theme.
Sandra

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

12 posted 2002-01-16 01:14 PM

Know something??

I like your prescription

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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