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Broken Little Angel
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Broken Little Angel |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio 
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hi yall no fancy intro this time.  just a sad poem from a sad person. tell me what yall think.Broken Little Angel what do you do when you lose it all? when you can no longer fly and have no place to fall your life, once together has fallen all apart everything around you crumbling especialy your heart you think you have it made and everything is fine hoping it will last forever you put your soul on the line but the odds are stacked agaist you no matter how hard you try always a losing battle always ends with a cry tears that were once of joy and laughter turn to pain in a flash leaving you broken and hurting and feeling like trash i cry to the alleyway confess all to the rain wishing that someone can help me and take away this pain i try to look into the mirror but the only thing i see is the shell of a broken angel an angel that once was me am i cursed to be like this? will it always be the same? as soon as i am happy i get played like a game i wish that i could shrink away down 4 inches and hide that way no one can hurt me and see the tears i cried but alas that cant be done and who would want me if it could who would want this little angel whos broken wings are no good would you take me in? and carry me away stick me in your pocket come and save my day? hold me in your hand and not let me go never letting me fall to your feet and the cold floor below i know that i aint much and my wings are all tore my body might be small my heart alittle sore but dont let size fool you my hearts as big as they come even though my body is a couple inches bigger then your thumb if you want this little angel just pick me off the ground i aint that hard to find listen for the crying sound i can be yours if you chose to be but then again who would want a broken little angel like me... Jesse Jaymz So tonight I'll ask |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
sooo sad Jesse! ::picks you up off the ground and holds you in my hand:: You are a life-sized angel and I prefer you that way so you can't hide from me!!  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed Jessee..keep writing as i always enjoy your words..:grin ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
This is a very sad poem. You put all of yourself in everything you do, and sometimes it ends up being painful because what is placed is sometimes within the hands of those that cannot be trusted. You are a good person, with an even brighter heart - remember that. |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Jesse, I love this poem and the little broken angel. So sweetly written that it tugs are heart strings. Cheryl |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Jesse,this was so sad and if I could I would pick up that broken little angel and give it back its smile.I really enjoyed the rhyming in this and the sentiments.Since I can`t pick the angel up I`ll just send another one to you.   Juanita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Jesse, this about broke my heart reading this, my heart cries out to you to these painful words! (sigh) You are a true angel to us all, sweet friend, but you are not small, you are lively and filled with true love, and there will come the most beautiful love you could ever dream of who will be admired by the light you share, as we all do, and want to love you forever and pick you up to raptures heavens! (big hugggsssss) You are our loving angel, and nothing can ever change that...ever, for we all love you so much! (wipes tears) So sa dbut beautiful, sweet friend, our hearts are always with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jesse, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
There's another broken angel out there feeling the same way and wondering when someone is going to pick her up. You'll meet her one of these days.  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetJesse~ A tender, touching emote~ 'but dont let size fool you my hearts as big as they come' AND ... a lot bigger than many, my friend~ You just keep that heart open and giving sweetie~ Some lil gal will come right in and be thankful that you have so much to give~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Awwww Jesse, It has been awhile since I have read your poetry. But like always, I am not disappointed in your lovely ability to write. Truely enjoyed, Mags Don't cry because it's over: smile because it happened. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this poem sure pulls at the heart strings...*sigh* well done...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
joanna: *hops in her hand* you know for a fact that i cant hide from you. no matter what size i am.  i am glad i can be your angel. *hugs and kisses*victoria: glad you stoped in. thank you hun. nicole: my west coast friend. *hugs* your right. i do that alot. and i will always remember what you said. you helped me alot with our talks. thank you hun. *hugs* Cheryl: thanks for the reply *hugs* Juanita: a north carolina thank you hun *hugs* that angel was sweet. as was your reply. i wish you could pick me up *hugs* Noah: now it is my turn to cry. your reply was sooo sweet. thank you my friend. i aint the only angel. for you are one too. Elizabeth: thank you hun. i can only hope that she is around that corner marge: thank you. i will keep it open. i just hope that i find her soon mags: *hugggggs* havnet seen you in forever. glad you came in. i missed you soooo much. *hugs* startime: *hugs back* thank you for stoping in So tonight I'll ask |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Jesse, you have so touched my heart with this. I know the feeing that things keep going wrong, no matter how hard you try. But you are worth it, so you have to keep trying. Beautiful poem, sweetie. Sandra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Jesse - a sad one for sure. Have felt the same, but hang in there. Peace be with you. I hope you don't mind, but I copied your poem 'Somebody Elses Angel', and played it on my guitar. Of course I don't know how it is suppose to go, but I did a tune anyway. I like it, very much... BC |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I’ve been there, I’ve felt this. You’ve written the emotion very well Jesse. I hope your angel finds its match. With a heart as big as yours, I’m sure it won’t be long. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
This is such a heart-wrenching read! How could that little angel be overlooked? Anyone who can't see past the size and broken wings to the essence of the angel inside is missing something great. Every little angel has immense value for who they are, not what they are, and so my friend, do you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yeah thats the way we feel if we are rejected...but someone new comes along and shows some admiration and appreciation and life looks good again...James |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
sandra: *hugs* glad i touched you with this poem. i hope that i am worth it. i knew you would love this one. bill my friend: thanks for the reply, and no i dont mind at all that you played my song. in fact i am highly flattered that someone loves my music that much. the song itself is a slow one, kinda old country style like willie. would love to play it for yall sometime if i could. tracey: *hugs* yes its a hard place to be. and i hope that i do find that angel. *hugs* thanks for stoping in mac attack: glad that you liked this. if there were more people like you in this world this little angel woudlnt be dodging feet on the floor but insted up in someones arms. thank you for your reply. it really meant alot to me james: glad to see you again. and also glad you replyed. [This message has been edited by Jesse Jaymz (01-21-2002 01:48 AM).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh how sad my dear lil angel.......you know that we all like and love you the way you are. Life isn't easy and sometimes lonelyness and sadness seems to win from all the happiness......but know that there are a lot of people who cares about you lil angel. ((((warm hugs)))) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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