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emily
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0 posted 2002-01-15 01:06 PM


Lost, I feel lost
so hurt
I'm crashing and I can't stop
when will I finally fall
who will be there to catch me
when I do
Voices, judgements, lies
stop!

Leave me alone

abusers of the mind who have
raped me of my emotions cease


[This message has been edited by emily (01-15-2002 01:07 PM).]

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RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-01-15 01:09 PM


oh emily, this brought tears to my eyes
Your troubles will be just a distant memory soon and you will find great happiness.
If you ever need a good listener, I'm just an e mail away.
I've felt this way many times before, everything will be alright (hugs)

RP

emily
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2 posted 2002-01-15 01:11 PM


don't cry, please!  I'm just releasing some dark thoughts....some say it's healthy, some say that  ....it'll be ok

Emily


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3 posted 2002-01-15 01:58 PM


We all need to release some of these dark thoughts once in a while.  The reality is though, that it will pass.  Great work.

    Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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4 posted 2002-01-15 02:26 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Emily, my words echo Joanna's; these tears may fall right now but very soon they will sparkle with light and happiness, and you will find true joy, sweet friend, I believe in it! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, our hearts are always with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Emily, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-01-15 11:10 PM


Powerful, haunting write emily.  I know that someone will be there to catch you when you fall.  We all have many who love us in spite of our many flaws.  Remember, it is always darkest before the dawn.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

emily
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6 posted 2002-01-22 02:17 PM


thank you nice friends, that is all true.  Just a bad time and place
that's why the words helped.

Emily


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