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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-01-15 10:21 AM


~ When I’m In You ~

When you are lying there just before you close your eyes
Reach out with your thoughts and feel me in your sighs
Every breath you take carries me deep into you
Feel me there within, as my spirit flows on through
You will feel my touch, as I travel through your heart?
Know that with me like this we’ll never be kept apart
My spirit tingles through your body feel me lift your soul
Hold me to you darling let me make you completely whole

When the night calls you to dreamland and you have to go
Feel me inside you, as I make your blood ebb and flow
It’s my spirit within you that calls up this passion’s tide
With me within your soul you have nowhere left to hide
I’m the need that consumes you in the heat of night
Washing your soul and making you long for daylight
Within the night bejewelled by stars my powers are best
At daybreak although still there a burning need its rest

When you lay yourself down to dream through the night
Call forth my essence to captivate and summon delight
When my spirit is swirling through you bringing desire
Imagine my touch flooding over your skin like liquid fire
With each breath you take you’ll find I’m deeper in you
I’m in your blood your breath your heart all ways through
I’m the dream you dream I’m each thought complete
When the night calls you feel the touch of my heartbeat


Marsha





To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

[This message has been edited by Marsha (01-15-2002 10:22 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-01-15 10:24 AM


this is very, very passionate, Marsha, rest those fingers dear

It is good to read someone who is sounding so happy and fulfilled.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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2 posted 2002-01-15 10:25 AM



Ah look at this!  Who would have thought just a few months ago, you would come tripping into Passions and blowing bubbles all over us.  Your Phoenix rose, your fire was lit, you've combined your poetry with some awesome wit....

and I am very proud to know you....

Hugs and Congratulations on this, your 4000th post...

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3 posted 2002-01-15 10:29 AM


Marsha,
Your fashion lives up to your passion. Wonderful write.

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4 posted 2002-01-15 10:56 AM




YAY!!! I LOVE IT!!! STANDING OVATION!!! BEAUTIFULLY BREATHTAKING, SWEET FRIEND, THIS IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL POEM TO RING IN 4000!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) I LOVE IT, SWEET FRIEND, BRAVO!!! (kiss on cheek) May true love forever fill your heart, sweet friend, we are all so happy for you! We all love you so much, sweet friend, here's to thousands more gorgeous poem from your loving heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-15-2002 10:56 AM).]

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5 posted 2002-01-15 11:15 AM


This piece is just simply breathtaking.  A wonderful and sweet write.  Congratulations on reaching 4,000 posts!

    Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-01-15 11:27 AM


Wow, this is SOME week for you, Marsha...
Falling in love, your birthday and your 4000 post all rolled into one!
Congratulations on all
and by the way......your poem is absolutely beautiful and just glows with passion!

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

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7 posted 2002-01-15 11:42 AM


WOW!!!!Sensual passion just pours out of these words...BRAVO!!!!This poem is a masterpiece painting your inner heart's desires...I LOVE IT.!! **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2002-01-15 12:56 PM


Marsha,a beautiful poem over flowing with love.



Love,

Juanita

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9 posted 2002-01-15 01:00 PM


Congrats on your 4000th post! I can't wait to see another 4000 from you dear marsha!
This was so gorgeous.

RP

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10 posted 2002-01-15 01:24 PM


Mushy one,

you've outdone yourself with this one. CONGRATULATIONS on the 4000th post. Now you can rest on your laurels...or something and give me a chance to grasp your soaring wings. Don't fly too far beyond me love.

Absolutely superb!

Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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11 posted 2002-01-15 02:09 PM


WOW Marsha!!!  This is soooo beautiful!!
You sound so in love!!
A magnificent piece for your 4000th post!!
Congratulations Mushy Girl!!!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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12 posted 2002-01-15 11:17 PM


Kathleen darling girl thank you so very very much YES darling girl this poem is special, and now I’ll lay myself back down and let my fingers do the talking That is what you meant wasn’t it?


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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13 posted 2002-01-15 11:18 PM


Kari darling sister of my soul well who’d have thought it indeed, I only came back because you said you missed me darling girl. I wasn’t meaning to stay long, but there’s something about the warmth here now that wraps itself around your heart and you don’t want to stray.

YOU however always had faith in me, thank you darling sister of mine. Of course you only want me here because YOU always look good standing next to me Well, if you will be wittier prettier and sweeter what do you expect. Naturally you’ll be the one looking pure and innocent and I’ll be the one looking like I’m not. Big smile


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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14 posted 2002-01-15 11:19 PM


Seymour darling boy thank you so very much, I must say that I definitely am happy and I think perhaps it shows. Passion certainly slips through whether I mean it too or not

You are always so sweet to me thank you for always being such a faithful reader of my writing. YOU are special you know


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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15 posted 2002-01-15 11:36 PM


flaming love. . . totally full of fire. . .

great job. . . congratulations. . .

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16 posted 2002-01-15 11:37 PM


A beautiful and passionate write, Marsha...congratulations on that 4000!
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17 posted 2002-01-16 12:24 PM


Marsha - congratulations on the 4000th. After doing all of these numbers I don't think I will ever be able to count that high again.

But this is most elegant, only as you can do. It has everything said that can be said.

Congratulations also, with this writing...

BC

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18 posted 2002-01-16 10:05 AM


Noah darling boy thank you so very much, Thank you so very very much. I did enjoy writing this poem, sometimes it’s easier than others and lately I’ve had more reason to write passion or so it seems

You are always so sweet to me, I thank you for always being there ready to read and send me warm love and smiles.

YOU are special you know


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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19 posted 2002-01-16 10:06 AM


Randy darling boy thank you so very very much

I don’t deserve such wonderful praise but I thank you for it. I do believe my writing has changed a little over the last few months, which is just as well it could certainly do with a lot of improving. If this is better I’m glad it means I am getting somewhere

Thank you again


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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20 posted 2002-01-16 10:08 AM


Lyra darling girl thank you so much YOU are a great inspiration to me you know. YOU and Juanita are both such vibrant and vital souls who always write with utter delight. Whether you are making me cry or laugh you reveal such insight in your writing that I’m awed

Thank you for being you my dearest friend. Big smile


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

[This message has been edited by Marsha (01-16-2002 10:15 AM).]

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21 posted 2002-01-16 10:13 AM


Beautiful and sweet,like only you can do!
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22 posted 2002-01-16 11:42 AM


Marsha CONGRATULATIONS WOW 4000. this is beautiful as are all your poems. floria
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23 posted 2002-01-16 11:49 AM


Congratulations, Marsha! Wow! 4000! And just look at all of the friends you have made! You, dear Marsha are very special! God bless you.
-newell

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24 posted 2002-01-16 10:11 PM


MMMMMMMMMM dont I just know these feelings sweet sis of mine...Brava dear one on 4000!!!!!
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25 posted 2002-01-16 10:52 PM


MarshaLove~
See ... that IS your name ~
AND I love you my dear darling girl~

Congratulations on the big numbers~
You're quite a number yourself ! !

Now ... how's about some more Mush~~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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26 posted 2002-01-16 11:27 PM


congrats on making 4000. great job. your poem is just wonderful.  great reading.  very nice work. love Alice
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27 posted 2002-01-17 01:18 PM


Karen darling girl thank you so very much, I’m always amazed and delighted by your writing. You are a delight to read and have as a friend thank you so much. As long as I can read you I’ll be here


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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28 posted 2002-01-17 01:19 PM


Juanita darling girl and one of my dearest friends YOU really are shining and it’s wonderful to see. YOU know how much I love your writing, love you, and as for your Stevie, mmmm mmm mm. What a clever mummy you were to make such a wonderful talented package.
It’s a good job you know I’m only playing And that just goes to show what a fabulous friend you are you even let me play with your favourite son. I knew that Passions would be a perfect home for us all, and WE all love you darling girl but I love you more Big smile

THANK YOU


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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29 posted 2002-01-17 01:20 PM


RP darling girl thank you so very very much. YOU are always a delight to read and I always look for your writing.

Thank you muchly for your shining light


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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30 posted 2002-01-17 01:27 PM


This is awesome! Mushy, mushy magnificent, magical, magnetic. Marsha, this is so cool.

"When my spirit is swirling through you bringing desire
Imagine my touch flooding over your skin like liquid fire"  

Wish I had written that!

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