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Changing (on Parkinson's Disease)
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Changing (on Parkinson's Disease) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Changing My footprint does not represent a footstep of my own I feel my hands are hands that don’t belong to me alone My mind is not the one that was bestowed to me at birth The only thing that still remains is beauty of the earth My arms are now too weak to lift the smallness of a child My feet don’t care to tread the lengthy distance of a mile My table is a place where with deliberateness I dine The only thing that stays the same is love I know is mine My simple tasks are finished at a slightly slower pace And I can see the shadows of concern upon your face For things are changing gradually, it’s obvious to me That the only thing unaltered are the rhythms of the sea Seasons come and go and spin forever round the sun Things you take for granted are the things that come undone Nobody need explain the upward path that lies ahead The only thing that doesn’t change, is red of cardinal red As long as roses open to the light of early morn As long as each sweet child cries of life when it is born As long as I can hear a grandchild whispering my name I’ll be in peace and comfort knowing all has stayed the same Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (01-15-2002 07:59 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A most valiant, emotional piece of introspective writing, Elizabeth. I have a friend whose husband suffers with this disease. I would like to be able to share this with her. I think if he were a poet, his thoughts would be the same. May I share this? |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Seasons come and go and spin forever round the sun Things you take for granted are the things that come undone" "As long as I can hear a grandchild whispering my name I’ll be in peace and comfort knowing all has stayed the same" Liz, I do believe every piece I read of yours becomes a timeless classic to me, and this is a true example, my friend. Beautifully rhythmic and flowing, with an inspirational message that will be felt by all who are blessed to read your sentiments. Truly a beautiful piece.  Best wishes and big hugs,  /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (01-15-2002 06:55 AM).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Your beauty and bravery shine in this Liz. Somehow you always know just what to say. I think this should be submitted to a magazine for publication. You are in my thoughts and prayers - and keep listening to the little ones, they are God's reward for us.  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Karilea, Thank you and of course you may use it in any way you wish. I woukd be happy if you would share it with someone who is in this situation Kit, Thank you my sister, twin in poetry. You warm my heart Liz |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you, Poet Devine, for your kind words You and others have been a great inspiration to me Liz |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, our hearts all go out to you and join with you in your prayers for everyone who lives with this disease. (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, may we all reach out to the children with a smile of faith and joy and find the remedy of love and hope in a smile! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I too would love to share this! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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True Reflections Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 143Ohio, USA |
Elizabeth, You've truly captured the pain of a horrible disease. Like a balloon leaving his hand and can't be retrieved. He can watch it and admire it, but can no longer hold it or control it. You see the world with eyes wide open. ........................Sorry, I sighed and passed out from lack of oxygen. Another wonderful effort (your poem, I mean). Roger |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, God, sweet lady, I have goose bumps all over. I dont know what to say to something so moving and so ....brave. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--You are beautiful in your grace of acceptance and in the way you see the world. Count me among the many who are amazed by your sweet spirit's outlook on life. You are a poet of exception and a friend I love dearly. Hugs! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, God bless you sweet poetess. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Liz, This touched me very deeply. Know that you are in my thoughts and prayers, my friend. Yes, this should be submitted for publication. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
It saddens me to see people suffer from diseases. Michael J Fox also has this disease  It is an honor to read your poetry, Thank you for sharing. God BlessRP |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
God bless you for writing this beautiful and sensitive poem, Liz. Please submit it for publication, where it will be seen by a large segment of the public. My first husband, who died in May of 99, was the discoverer of Mirapex, the new anti-parkinson's drug, so I have some familiarity with the disease...and your poem does a beautiful job of describing it.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My footprint does not represent a footstep of my own I feel my hands are hands that don?t belong to me alone My mind is not the one that was bestowed to me at birth The only thing that still remains is beauty of the earth The only thing that stays the same is love I know is mine My simple tasks are finished at a slightly slower pace And I can see the shadows of concern upon your face For things are changing gradually, it?s obvious to me That the only thing unaltered are the rhythms of the sea Seasons come and go and spin forever round the sun Things you take for granted are the things that come undone As long as I can hear a grandchild whispering my name I?ll be in peace and comfort knowing all has stayed the same ============================================== I dont know which is more touching and impressive about this piece... the fragile, vulnerabilityof its words ... the honesty of it...the bravery...or the sincere wisdom it speaks of ... all these things tied up in a bow of your gift of cadence makes for further proof that you are indeed "grace under pressure" and a poetess of grace. Bless you dear Liz...your spirit is an example for us all.  [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (01-15-2002 04:42 PM).] |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
This touched me very deeply, it is very true that the things that we take for granted are the things that come undone. We don't know what we really have until something happens and everything has changed. You have a beautiful heart for sharing this. I thank you! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I was very touched by your responses to this poem. I have had the desease for about 4 years and mine is progressing slowly, so in my case the chances are very good that a cure will be found that will benefit me. If not for this situation, I never would have started writing poetry. Roger, please hold on to your baloons! Thank you all Liz |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Elizabeth, I read and re-read this heartfelt poem and am still at a loss for all the words I need to fully comment here. I know several things that haven't changed about you that are so important, like your spirit, your loving and giving heart, your ability to laugh and yes, also to cry, your ability to share all of the aforementioned in some of the most beautiful poetry ever to be seen by my eyes. I can't forget to mention that your "brain exercises" are a God-given gift and I have yet to hear of him taking one back  , and the goodness of your heart shares this poetry of perfection with us each and every single day! Every day! So you may walk a little slower, and things may not be quite the same, but today I have to tell you I have never been prouder of a friend in my entire life, because Lady Santos, one thing for sure hasn't changed - your are one "gutsy lady", and I love you to bits and wanted you to know that! ~* CARPE' DIEM *~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (01-16-2002 04:05 AM).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Well, you have me in tears, and we are missing each other by seconds, so check you e-mail, dearlady Mysteria. I would also like to repeat that all of your comments touched me deeply. Madam Chipmunk, how coincidental that your husband was involved with this, and so you know a lot about what's going on. I am so certain a cure will come within the nexy 8 to 10 years, and then all neurological deseases will reap the benefits, Thank you Sharon for you loving comments I still hug real good, so here's a big hug to all Liz |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A very lovely and intense write Liz, touching deeply on a subject that so many have had to deal with. Well done. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
My dear sweet wonderful friend... We are blessed.. Blessed to have a Grace such as yours touch our lives each and every day... Please know that with each small physical setback you encounter, your wonderful mind takes a giant step forward.. You are loved - by a truly wonderful and supportive family - both in your personal life and in your Passionate one... This is an exquisite work... Love you Liz...  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your grace is equaled only by your talent... and both leave me in awe! *S* I would never be able to bring myself to say I'm glad you have this disease for a soul as kind and gentle as yours deserves only joy... but I'm so very glad you started writing poetry!!! I'm a pessimist who doesn't believe much in silver linings... but some of the most beautiful words I've ever read have come from your pen... I simply cannot imagine a world where these poems I treasure didn't exist. As long as this heart's beating and these eyes are offered sight I'll consider it an honor to read everything you write. *S* |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Liz, this is so touching, graceful and inspirational. You are one classy lady! My thoughts are with you Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
My Dear Friend Elizabeth... I am so sorry, I knew not of this illness. And although mine is much more minor, we have another thing in common. As I have Fibromyalgia and it is somewhat debilitating. I cannot lift anything more than five pounds...I cried with this poem. I am so very happy that you can write about it. I believe it helps to write and share with friends. You are in my prayers, lovely poet and friend that you are, floria |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you dear friends for your loving comments.I am familiar, Floria, with Fibromyalgia, and like Parkinsons, you don't quite know what to expect when you wake up in the morning. They both manifest themselves in ways we don't expect.I wish you well with this very painful and mysterious desease. Thank you for sharing. I am warmed by all the comments to this poem Liz |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i am impressed with your strength and with your quiet acceptance of your illness...May God bless |
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