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In My Dreams
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In My Dreams |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas 
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I sit here over coffee, And I think about the past. Of plans we made by telephone I knew they could not last. Of dreams which quickly vanished- Like the sunlight dries the dew- The gentle cadence of your voice... I'm surely missing you. But in my dreams you're smiling And holding out your arms- I take you to me gently- And revel in your charms... I hear you say, "I love you"- And, My, how real it seems. You'll always be my darling As you live on in my dreams. I guess if it is make-believe- We should go all the way... I somehow have the feeling... that it's our wedding day- I'll carry you so gently- In the moonlight's silvery beams... This night will last forever- You are living in my dreams. [This message has been edited by John Yaws (01-16-2002 03:41 AM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Her love will live forever in your dreams, my friend, that is the magic of love. It never truly dies or goes away. This is so beautiful and filled with such tenderness. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your dreams will always remain close to your heart, and her love will always shine inside of you, for the love in her dreams will always be real and special! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, these are such fabulous sentiments! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very beautifully done, John. If this is for someone special...your love sure comes across well! Very romantic.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This is absolutely sad but it is also beautifully done. Ahh..to fall to this fate is not a fun ride. Dreams are wonderful, but sometimes we need more. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is bittersweet John, a lovely poem. I enjoyed it much, floria |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
But in my dreams you're smiling And holding out your arms- I take you to me gently- And revel in your charms... John, This is lovely, I enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Sir, this is sad and lovely. Sometimes dreams are all we have left. |
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