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D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-01-15 01:57 AM

Written in a woman's view hoping to be that lucky poet with the right thing to say.

Poet why do you not make love to me tonight
In the words you speak claim me
Caress my needs in flowing refrains
Lay your words into me
To erupt me into endless passion
Take me into the clouds
To float in ecstasy

Yes poet do me right
That I may remember
Till the winds of time die down
And only then will your words
No longer echo within me

Let us claim the universe
In never ending ways
To create worlds of new positions
To see our emotions rise
In sunrise and especially the sunsets
Where you will lay me down
On the greatest blanket of love
Within natures fertile garden

In the whispers you will claim me
Blending in with the hues
That will melt into a billion stars
Each one wanting more attention
In words so sensuous
That the stars will blink in their appreciation
We will create our own halo
Of intimate warmth

So poet what are you smiling
When you know you are in trouble
So anything you say will create the spell
To captivate me into you
In cuddles of need

Afterwards I will make you write
Like you never have before
To climax within you
The need for others to fly
Within their souls
Creating the words
That will recycle the memory
Within their special whispers

D.Lester Young (01/14/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-01-15 12:21 PM

*sigh* oh gosh did you ever get the words right. ABSOLUTELY STUNNING....*sigh* I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-15 12:23 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it!!! (big hugggsssss) Such beauty and passion fills your descriptive words, sweet friend, this is fabulous! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lester, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

3 posted 2002-01-16 10:56 PM

Very well done!! An enjoyable read!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-01-16 10:59 PM

Yes...these are special whispered words indeed!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

poetryinmotion
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 61
mass

5 posted 2002-01-16 11:02 PM

this is such a wonderful poem D. very romantic. you said the right words in your poem. very well written. great job. love Alice

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

6 posted 2002-01-16 11:28 PM

WOW!!! I'm sure the other lady poets will agree...this is one passionate poem!!! I love the way you intermingled writing passion with heart's passion, flaming desires.

***Ivy Rose

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