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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Here I stand alone at the end reversing the motion with nowhere to go it's time to start over again. I don't want to see the same places I've been in the past, they're already gone. A journey through time, forgotten,and already missed. To see all the places I never bothered to stop and the people I let pass me by. There is so much to miss when you stand all alone with tears welling up in your eyes. To these places I'll go and look for the faces I'll make better use of my time. I'll work my way back and begin once again my mistakes I'll try to amend. I won't be a back up, a hit or a miss or drive myself into a wall. Bound and determined once and for all, my plans are to travel in style. I'll not be detoured, not ever again the wrong turns I'll steer to make right. Because where I am going I've already been, and so much has changed over time. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - been there, done that too. It's amazing when one breaks out to see with their own eyes the beauty of what's there... For their is that beauty, it's all around, even in ones backyard... Peace be with you.... Bc |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I won't be a back up, a hit or a miss or drive myself into a wall. Bound and determined once and for all, my plans are to travel in style. Live and learn right?..i agree..enjoyed.. nicely said..and lots of happiness to you Hugss ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you Bill Charles for your kindness and and understanding. Victoria~ I've lived and learned alright, haven't we all? I don't think there is a map that can take us there, we either make it or we learn to adjust.  So I'm adjusting. I do thank you very much. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
your words, touching because we all wish to get that 'somewhere' place, inspiring, and always beautiful even tho they are twinged with a bit of sadness. Serenade, sometimes the past is best to be left behind. Its the most difficult thing to do in life, i think. You've been writing with great grace lately, and i applaud you and hope happiness stays on your shoulder. Be well, and keep smiling. SR |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
This is a lovely poem. I always admire when a person sees what they did wrong and decides to start anew! This has a lovely message of self-analysis and maturity! Well done! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! I love it, sweet friend, I'm so ahppy to hear these beautiful words from your heart of hope and love, for we can always find a way around each wrong turn we make and turn around at every culdesac! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is fabulous! God Bless You! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! I love it, sweet friend, I'm so ahppy to hear these beautiful words from your heart of hope and love, for we can always find a way around each wrong turn we make and turn around at every culdesac! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is fabulous! God Bless You! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you SR, I appreciate you taking the time to read me. I'm not about to stop smiling or let life pass me by. Now wait just a minute, you're saying it's best to leave the past behind? I think that's exactly what I was writing about, 'in the past, it's already gone' I've got a notion to get back to the future. hehehe....I'm serious though! Thanks again for your encouraging words. Morcastlin~ I'm always analyzing myself and one of my worst critic. Such a nasty little habit of mine. Thank you very much for your compliments.Noah dear~ You are such a sweet man, and always hit pretty close to home as to what I'm writing about. I can't help this mental vision of doing 360's in a culdesac! Thanks for making me smile. |
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