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Beauty I've Seen
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Beauty I've Seen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“BEAUTY I’VE SEEN” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I’ve seen a cloud in the summer daylight, a moonbeam falling, on a starry night, the lake peaceful and serene, resting there, ocean waters, as they touch everywhere… I’ve seen mountains, reaching to the sky, the forests, reaching out to beautify, constellations shining in the darkness, the Milky Way and all it’s mightiness… Then I see you, but I don’t compare, it’s because of you, of them I’m aware, you have guided me through, to harmonize, with all this beauty, I’ve seen with my eyes… ~~~~ |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ Some people can live their lives and never see this....and there is so much beauty out there....this takes my breath away....  Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-14-2002 11:28 PM).] |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Well done Bill!!! You made me see those things as well.. and how wonderful it is that love can make us see through different eyes Pepper |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill~Seems as though when we are in love we see things we overlooked before....and things appear brighter, more full of colour. Beautifully penned poet sir! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your beautiful heart always writes the most beautiful visions of all that your loving heart captivates in such poetic majesty! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may loves happiness forever have you seeeing the most gorgeous things in the world we can ever dream of! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautifully said, Bill  |
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poetryinmotion Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 61mass |
hi Bill. i am new here. just started tonight. i loved your poem. very well written. wonderful poem. very romantic. romance is the best feeling in the world. great job. love Alice aka poetryinmotion |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
like I've always said. . . nobody tells it like you BC. . . excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Then I see you, but I don’t compare, it’s because of you, of them I’m aware, The right woman, the right love...brings things into focus we never saw before. Incredible write, BC. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Then I see you, but I don’t compare, it’s because of you, of them I’m aware~ I'm all shook up tonight~ Thank you for leaving me with this thought before bedtime. You write so beautifully. say goodnight Gracie, goodnight Bill. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
sounds like an image you won't ever forget! very romantic, Bill. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
This was simply stunning! A gorgeous read...and soooo romantic. The closing was great! Bravo!!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is fabulous writing, you never cease to stun and amaze me. Not because I don’t expect your writing to be beautiful I know it is. But I never expect it to continue to get better and more descriptive than ever. You know that this is utterly wonderful don’t you, the flow and the metre are just perfect Truly sensational writing, beauty is always welcome darling man and YOU bring so much of it Thank you for this wonderful poem it’s magic As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Bill,this is so true you can see so much more beauty when you`re in love or just plain happy    Juanita |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Then I see you, but I don’t compare, it’s because of you, of them I’m aware, you have guided me through, to harmonize, with all this beauty, I’ve seen with my eyes… I really love this one..beautifull Bill..they say love is blind..but it isnt blind to the beauty it brings..everything is living color instead of black and white.. ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Could'nt have said it better myself, Bill. This is one breathtaking piece here. I loved it, great job! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* your writing shows perfectly all the beauty you have seen and when seen anew through love's eyes it is even more stunning then before. Wonderful writing...I love the whole feel of this poem. Romance is an incredibly big part of your writing and you do it so very well. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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