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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-01-14 07:22 PM


Within Me


Within my soul there’s a place full of delight
Illumed and brightened by your loving light
You write wonderful words of love to me
That sing of friendship that was meant to be
Before you guided my steps away from hell
I was bereft of hope I had nothing left to sell
Then you came and showed me the way home
You showed me I didn’t have to be alone

Within my heart there’s a sanctuary divine
A place where hope and love often dine
Fed and nourished by the love from you
And kept alive by your spirit pure and true
I had wandered and fallen far from light
Was confused and blinded in the dark of night
Didn’t know where I was or how I got there
You showed me love and taught me to care

Within my spirit there’s your spirit still
It lives in me now and so it always will
Like twins whose minds are linked eternally
We are united in spirit and live in harmony
We resonate in time to the self-same song
And we will do so our whole lives long
If I should ever wander too far from home
You hold the lamp that guides me home


Marsha


Dedicated to YOU for all you are and for the place you hold within me. I am enriched and blessed by the presence of you.


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2002-01-14 07:28 PM


*sigh* Marsha this is a beautiful poem to someone who shares a special place in your heart. Well said with heartfelt feelings. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2002-01-14 07:35 PM


Oh Marsha I loved it all but the last two lines were really wonderful. floria
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3 posted 2002-01-14 07:36 PM


I can't imagine anyone who wouldn't be delighted to receive such a poem of praise and love.
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4 posted 2002-01-14 07:46 PM


hey sweetie this is a beautiful tribute to that special someone. (hugs)


RP

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5 posted 2002-01-14 11:01 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always paint the most gorgeous visions of true love! (smiles) We are all so happy for you, sweet friend, we all wish you the greatest happiness for you always, may he forever light your heart with true love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-01-14 11:32 PM


Marsha -  this is just so soft and lovely. May the one that reads this, be forever in your heart my friend...

BC

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7 posted 2002-01-14 11:39 PM


Marsha, you made the tears roll down my cheeks.. so lovely and so very soft.. simply a wonderful poem.  I can only imagine how wonderful that love of yours is to inspire this..

you keep on outdoing yourself!!!!

Hugs,

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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8 posted 2002-01-14 11:39 PM


You who? You who? Geez, I sound like a yodeler!!

Nicely penned, mushy one!!

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9 posted 2002-01-15 09:25 AM


Marsha,
Once upon a forum, I stumbled,
Looked for words, but often fumbled,
Then was graced by a lady from Kent,
Loved me even though I was bent.

Looked to her for guidance and direction,
From those mean poets, a wenches protection.
She along, with her Aussie twin,
Placed on my face a permanent grin.

I'm better for having her, here in my life,
We can flirt and have fun cause she ain't my wife.
Just a wonderful woman from over the sea,
Sending care packages to little ol' me.


You wrote a beautiful poem, my friend.

Roger

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10 posted 2002-01-15 09:34 AM


Marsha,a beautiful dedication from a beautiful friend.




Love,

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

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11 posted 2002-01-15 10:02 AM


Oh Marsha, this was sooooo lovely! The flow was gorgeous! Love, ah...sigh... is such a wonderful thing when it is truly found! You expressed that so well! Bravo!
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12 posted 2002-01-15 01:12 PM


Marsha,
I am cut to the quick, I thought I was the only one...I should have known your are too beautiful to be confined to one. Sunshine must spread itself to bring joy to the world.
Love this millions and squillions of happy bytes.
*HuGGleS*
Lynne

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Marsha
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13 posted 2002-01-15 04:58 PM


Karen darling girl thank you so very much, I must say that I definitely am happy and I think perhaps it shows

You are always so sweet to me thank you for always being such a faithful reader of my writing. YOU are special you know


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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14 posted 2002-01-15 05:00 PM


Floria darling girl thank you so very very much YES darling girl this poem is special


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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15 posted 2002-01-15 05:01 PM


Canuckster thank you dear friend you are far too kind to me.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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16 posted 2002-01-15 05:06 PM


lovely poem !!!!!
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17 posted 2002-01-15 05:32 PM


I think I know just who I'll send this to via the e-card feature if you don't mind, Sweet Lady! This is just wonderful!

*Jenn*

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18 posted 2002-01-15 05:34 PM


*jenn smacks self in forehead*
Umm..HELLO JENN! LIBRARY STUFF HERE! Ya mind a stay in my library?

Marsha
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19 posted 2002-01-16 10:24 AM


RP darling girl thank you very very muchly YOU are such a great writer you know, that I am humbled that you can such nice things about me. This is a very special poem, and I know that the YOU in it really does appreciate it. But in truth this could apply to so many of my friends and family. They have each given me so very much.

I have been blessed by having such love bestowed on me, particularly since I don’t deserve it. But thank you all eanyway

Thank you for being you my dearest friend. Big smile


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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20 posted 2002-01-16 10:26 AM


Noah darling boy thank you so very much,

You are always so sweet to me, I thank you for always being there ready to read and send me warm love and smiles.

YOU are special you know


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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21 posted 2002-01-16 10:55 AM


Bill darling boy thank you muchly. YOU are always such an inspiration to me. YOUR use of line and imagery is utterly outstanding no one writes Romance the way you do

You are always so sweet to me thank you. And thank you for the loving help and support you give YOU are one in a million


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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22 posted 2002-01-16 11:35 AM


Pepper darling girl well who’d have thought it a year ago that I would be so happy and you would be even more so? But truly darling girl it’s wonderful to see you glowing so, YOU really are shining and it’s wonderful to see.

And as for Passions lately there’s something about the warmth here now that wraps itself around your heart and you don’t want to stray.

YOU however always had faith in me, thank you darling sister of mine.

Isn’t love fabulous Big smile


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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23 posted 2002-01-16 11:38 AM


’Deer dear heart Yoo Hoo Sorry I simply couldn’t resist I can resist practically anything except temptation

Thank you kindly dearest heart you are far too good to me. I enjoyed writing this one of those times perhaps when my thoughts actually got inscribed on the page.

Big grin Thank YOU for your help and friendship dear ‘Deer it is appreciated and YOU are very much so


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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24 posted 2002-01-16 11:40 AM


see yoRoger darling boy shhhhhhhhhhhh I think we have them fooled none of them suspect that we are good friends. I knew that I’d get away with locking you in my library

Wonderful poem darling boy I’ll save it for those rainy days

Do YOU think we’ve got away with it? MMmmmm we’re sure to have done


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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