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Will You Dance With Me Underneath Starlight
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Will You Dance With Me Underneath Starlight |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Will You Dance With Me Underneath Starlight Feeling the softness of a summer night Embraced in velvet darkness of the sky Heart soars as imagination takes flight Passions come to life with all it implies Man with lover’s heart walks across the sand His body’s wrapped within brilliant moonbeams A knowing smile that says he understands Flashing a sparkle in his eyes that gleams He kisses me with heat of burning fires Pulling me close against his manly chest His touch is all my yearning soul requires I hope he fills my lonely heart’s request Will you share this dream until first dawn’s light Will you dance with me underneath starlight Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karen darling girl this is UTTERLY utterly fabulous I love the imagery you’ve used here, truly darling girl you can paint a picture of Romance and star spangled dreams better than almost anyone This is without doubt one of your utter best, what can I say except this is utterly wonderful. Fabulous writing and a delight to read As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Absolutlely beautiful write, Karen.  All writing comes |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Karen, I read the title and I knew this would be good. gosh I cant even write one romantic poem. lovely this is . floria |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
The night, the dark sky,starlight, moonbeams, the sand, what more could two lovers wish for!!You paint as romantic and fulfilling as could be painted dearest friend!!! Words expressed without deception...Are the beginning of a poem's conception |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Romance as its best!!! Any man would be honored to dance with you. (hugs) RP |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...of course...what man would not dance with you under starlight? I did have the clone taught how to dance.. So...jump off your Dragon and shuffle away.. For the night is young and the clone awaits.. Beautifully written lady...very sensual as you can do so well.. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karen~ Such a beautiful view of lovers wanting the dance....as always, your words of love leave readers sighing.... lovely new picture of you too... be well be safe..Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-14-2002 08:36 PM).] |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Star, what can I say?! This was awesome! It was so very vivid and lovely! **Applause** |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, what a wonderful picture you have painted, and who is the fool that is not already dancing with you? Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Dancing under the starlight...a lovely image Karen dear..hugs...enjoyed as always ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Karen! As romantic and dreamy as always....dance away into the night! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Startime, wow, this really packs a punch. Absolutely beautiful.... |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Karen - This one got pretty heated, especially that last stanza. Very good. Dave |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm winking and smiling at this one. I have an affinity for moonbeams and starlight, and this is a tasty warm romantic sensual poem. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Karen - I also dream until first dawn's light, and as you know, will dance underneath the evenings starlight.. Very nice write, as you do... BC |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Starlight,I bet any man would dance with you anywhere with these beautiful words.   Juanita "always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to: [This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (01-15-2002 09:46 AM).] |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Karen, Where can I sign up for lessons? This makes my attempt look pretty amateurish. Very stirring and romantic. Cheryl |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful love poem, Karen...and a sonnet in it's finest form. Very excellent, Karen! I also like your new photo.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Marsha...*giggling* I just somehow knew you would enjoy this one. **big hugs** LoneWolf... Thank you so much...I am glad you liked it. **big hugs**floria...*grin* the title is a little long but sure suits the mood I was in. **big hugs** Brian...you are such a dear...Someday I hope to have the same kind of love you share with your wife...You have always been such a ray of hope to me. **big hugs** RP...*giggling wickedly* mmmm I don't think I will settle for just any man...He must be the right man. Thank you, so much. **big hugs** Magnus....did you tell Lou to help you make sure he has all the training you have...*giggling* I will need a partner under the moon soon... Thanks, dear friend. **big hugs** Lauren...*grin* you are one to talk...everytime I see your name I know I am in for some first class sighing. **big hugs** Morcastlin...well thank you...you too should be taking a bow for the wonderful visions of your poems..**big hugs** Sandra...now if only we could find us some really good partners we could have a wonderful time dancing the night away..**big hugs** Victoria...thank you so much...I am glad you enjoyed the vision of it. **big hugs** Nancy...*grin*I just can't seem to get away from romance...I will have to try and write something else one of these days..**big hugs** AWC....I am so glad you could feel what I was trying to say...Thank you, so much..**big hugs** Dave...*grin* I tried not to get too warm but it is hard when the vision you see is so heated. I am glad you liked it. **big hugs** Midnightsun...Oh yes, we share that feeling so well...I just love anything that seems to have that magical touch to it...**big hugs** BC...*grin* yes you do dance in the romance of all that nature has to offer...you poems prove that you have a wonderfully romantic heart. The lady who captures it will be very blessed indeed...**big hugs** Juanita...mmmm *looking around* mmm can't seem to find any...maybe they are afraid of starlight....*grin* **big hugs** Cheryl...your attempt(as you call it) is a masterpiece of romantic writing...don't kid yourself you have a talent for romance that is incredible. I loved your poem and want to see more like it. **big hugs** vandana....*smile* I am so glad you liked it. **big hugs** MC....*grin* thank you so much, I love sonnets but just can't seem to get them to flow right...I think I'll just keep trying from time to time and someday get it right ...and thank you for liking the new picture too. **big hugs**Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
how did I miss this one? Very romantic, a vision we all have probably had Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Irish Rose...*grin* I do know one thing...with your wild Irish blood you would surely have had many of these dreams...and made a few come true too. *wicked grin* **big hugs** I am glad you liked it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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