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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-01-14 05:48 PM




(This is a re-post from last August, which I wrote for one of my best friends...Samantha G. Kennedy, who is currently been feeling terribly ill and has had to go to the hospital. She has been a friend of mine for over a year and a half, and she has always been a butterfly in my visions, spreading love and laughter to everyone who meets her and knows her! I decided to re-post this to show her how she is such a loving person to everyone and as a prayer to hope she gets well soon. Please join me in my prayers for this true angel of beauty and love and words. God Bless You all!!!

Velvet Butterfly
By: Noah Eaton
8/11/01

Sweet butterfly, oh, velvet butterfly
Whistle your ballad in the gentle rosemary vale
God gave you a name of grace
Little Butterfly, may you grow and have angels hail

Kaleidoscope whim floods her rainbow wings
A candid daughter to angels of the earth
Spreading myriads of colors from meadows to the top of the mountain
Gracing lilies of the valley, harping bridges of light against a prism hearth

A star in broad daylight, taking flight ‘neath azure lagoon skies
Like an arrow launched from a fair maidens tower, calling for her prince
Sleeping on castles in the sky, true beauty never feigned
Her heart sings with miraculous beauty, crowned in married bliss

Damasked in the sunlight, flittering sunbeams in an arbitrary dreamscape
Surpassing beauty adorned in dandelion and autumn-leave robes
May your voice be your beautiful intimacy
And every chance you get, let your wings be aflame in dance and soul

Sweet butterfly, oh, velvet butterfly
He gave you this sweet name
May all you meet be admired by your loveliness
Little Butterfly, may today be another sunny day


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-14-2002 05:50 PM).]

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nichole2005
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1 posted 2002-01-14 06:03 PM


This is on Fire. I love the way you put this. I am sorry about your friend. Thank you so much for sharing this with everyone.

  

Ariana
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2 posted 2002-01-14 06:21 PM


Noah:

What a beautiful tribute to your friend and I hope that she is feeling better soon.  You have a wonderful heart and you are a true friend.

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3 posted 2002-01-14 06:27 PM


Noah,

I'm saddened to hear about your friend Samantha. She will be in my prayers until she gets well!

RP

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4 posted 2002-01-14 06:37 PM


Dear Noah, this is just beautiful and Samantha will be in my prayers. God bless. floria
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5 posted 2002-01-14 07:24 PM


You never learn so much about a person as when you see how they treat another who is suffering and needs encouragement.  Well done.
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6 posted 2002-01-14 08:23 PM


She will be in my prayers, and how thoughtful of you to share this poem....please let us know if she gets better....


Lauren~


Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

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Startime
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7 posted 2002-01-14 08:40 PM


*sigh* A beautiful tribute to her, Noah...I am sure she feels your love and prayers...my prayers are joined with yours on her behalf....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2002-01-14 08:50 PM


You are such a wonderful angel Noah..
she is lucky to have you for a friend..

                  ~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


brianbeaudry
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9 posted 2002-01-14 08:53 PM


Yes...I remember well this touching piece Noah....A beautiful tribute to a special lady

Words expressed without deception...Are the beginning of a poem's conception

Nate Dogg
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10 posted 2002-01-14 08:56 PM


Very beautiful write...I'm sure you're friend will enjoy this very much!!

Nathan

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11 posted 2002-01-14 09:17 PM


Wonderful write for your friend sweet Noah.
Your dear friend will be in my prayers.
She is so lucky to have a friend like you!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2002-01-14 09:51 PM


Noah these are nice thoughts for your friend Samantha...James
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13 posted 2002-01-14 10:00 PM


Noah, you are so sweet, and a such a good loyal friend!  Great poem, I especially love the title!  Wonderful1


Noelle

"Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly"  Langston Hughes

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