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Alicat
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0 posted 2002-01-14 05:33 PM


Dappled grey my lover's eye winks
And eye to eye a fragile memory is born
Amidst the wreckage of prior romance shorn
Dancing to the tune of silvered droplet plinks.

Dusty rose my lover's lips purse
And lip to lip a growing memory stands
Takes heated iron in hand and my heart brands;
The pain of ectasy does bless and curse.

Driven snow my lover's skin yields
And skin to skin a virile memory alive
Brings us closer; waxing passions derive;
Memory a monolith to us and love builds.

Eyes and lips and skin does she possess
But never with these will she me bless.


Alicat

(Thank you Sunny one for the request)

© Copyright 2002 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-01-14 05:39 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I'm so happy Sunnyone requested this beautiful sonnet of yours, this is soooooo romantic and a true treasure! (sigh) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, may loves happiness forever fill your heart and forever build the love in your heart with the wax of trust and faithfulness! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alastair, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-14-2002 05:39 PM).]

Poet deVine
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2 posted 2002-01-14 07:43 PM


Oh Ali, this is so good. I feel like I should be listening to Elizabethan chants while reading it.  
Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-01-14 07:49 PM


Ohhhh this is soooo good!!!  I am so pleased you reposted this gem!  
~Hugs, Nanners~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Morcastlin
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4 posted 2002-01-14 08:06 PM


Alicat, this was a beautiful poem! So tender... Well done!
doreen peri
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5 posted 2002-02-17 08:00 PM


beautiful!!!!! i love this!!!!!
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