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Un-grounded
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Un-grounded |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Seems effortless to stream aloft o'er landscapes of a concrete world Your breath against my cheek so soft the weight of cares soon slips away As scared to leave that you'll be lost I lightly kiss sleep-tousled curls for I shall soon feel her embrace and then but part of me will stay Though you command my thoughts by day so she does rule my dreams by night She's shown me what there is to see un-bounded is the beauty there Where you and I hold each too tight in her arms I am granted flight Pray be not jealous love of light the two of you cannot compare While you are flesh this one is not she has no form that I might hold Her charms are strictly those begot of fancy they cannot be real and with detachment as I drift above I sense that she is cold She has no heart nor soul at all a phantasm for which I feel no love within these dreams I've found need be an anchor to the ground |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Doc--How beautiful!..the flow of this poem is as graceful as music, and the topic, pure romance. I really enjoyed reading it..thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) So very heartwrenching but beautiful, sweet friend, may the phantom of your dreams soon be overshadowed with light to reveal the angel of your dreams before your very eyes to love you forever! (big hugggsssss) Your words are always so fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet William, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Mystical feelings of trying to grasp something made of dream dust. BRAVO!!! A poem that I find inspiring....**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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