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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Fluttering ~*Marge Tindal*~  I have worn soft flutter on warm winds of Spring Set my flight to distant winging across a season in full swing of Peonies in bloom~ Caught a driving drizzle into Summer - bummer Resting on the branches of a Laurel as my wingless surmise caught me in total surprise~ Drifted beyond the whispered call of Fall to the place that gathers the Crayola of me wrapped in silk cocoon of kaleidoscopic threading~ Deeply hibernating through the Winter chilling I pause for the metamorphosis of my spirit to take wing lifting me to the place that awaits my coming~ Full-circle of the Avalon hills where change is just a flutter away~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Fluttering, oh how beautiful, and the angel enhanced this beautiful poem. floria |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--sister of mine..this is colored with seasons and changes, and woven together it makes a poem from a beautiful spirit..you! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marge This was so beautiful and very much enjoyed. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I love all the seasons...this is absolutely beautiful, Marge. I love it and I love the way you presented it too. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Purely a magical, mystical wonder of enchantment! Hugs, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
your muse has flutter wings on today  this is beautiful Marge..... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ this is indeed so lovely.... a treasure for all who read... HUGSSSS Lauren~  Tomorrow's another day |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, This is beautiful and I loved the use of all of the seasons, you are such a sweetie, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marge, loved all the images and the natural beauty of this poem. Excellent Writing!!! **Ivy Rose |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
marge, what a lovely poem with a great blend of that creativity that I always enjoy in your poems |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, soft and sorta dreamy. I like. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this one, Marge. *S* From the giggles that "Caught a driving drizzle into Summer - bummer" gave me... to the gentle hope that stirs in the last 4 lines... every word is a treasure. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Summer Winter Autumn Fall you have a word for them all. *L* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Strbbux~ Floria, thank you so much~ Martie~ This little piece is about as near and dear to the spirit of me as I can come~ Thank you, sweet Sis~ SueTang~ I appreciate that .. thank you~ StarTime~ Thank you so very much~ Ellie~ I always appreciate a read from you, sweet lady~ SEA~ *Hugs* ... thank you gal~ GreenEyes~ So good to see you sweetie .. thank you~ Cerenity~ I love drawing you into the circle, my friend~ Thank you always~ IvyRose~ I sure appreciate that~ Chelsea~ It is a delight to see you. Thank you so much dear~ Dee~ Yes, 'dreamy' is a nice thought~ Hugs, gal~ SuthernGal~ I love that *giggle* of yours ! As you know ... I'm a little under the weather, but the muses are in attendance~ LOVE YOU~ Seymour~ Thank you, sweet poet friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Gee, way down the list of responders here but glad to be there - much better than to have missed this gem... jwesley |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Gee, way down the list of responders here but glad to be there - much better than to have missed this gem... jwesley |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Change is just a flutter away.." indeed - Nice poem - Great finale... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderfully crafted with such an upswing of moods and images in each verse. A pure delight to read! Beautiful Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ That you are here ... breathes of gentle friendship~ Thank you~ Nan~ Thank you, dearest lady~ ETHome~ To see your reply is 'pure delight' to my poetic heart~ Thank you so much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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