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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-01-14 01:52 PM



Within The Amber Forest

~*Marge Tindal*~

Somewhere deep in the amber forest
there lies a half-hidden lagoon
where Sprites and Faeries choreograph laughter
in footfalls beneath a slivered moon~

In still of night when the moon is right
the dance begins anew
Wingless flight in mid-of-night
tells the tale of renew~

Out of the sleepy hollow they come
from 'neath cypress stump to play
All the voices of the night
dance in sweet display~

For 'ere shadows crisscross the evening
Faeries shuffle fleet-feet without flight
Reverberating wonderment across the swamp
in staccato of sheer delight~

It is a time of Sprites and Faeries
to lift their voices in song
to dance the dance of Fae-in-prance
o'er the steamy bog~

If perchance you should happen
upon this ritual of dancing and singing
be sure to listen silently
lest they take to winging~

Believe what you have witnessed
share with others what you've seen
for the very magic land of the Faeries
is found when we believe~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-14 01:58 PM


Marge, Oh how I love poems and writings about the "wee ones." This plus the beautiful pics is a delight. Chris

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2 posted 2002-01-14 02:32 PM


oh Marge, this is SO beautiful!! I love the pictures, they go perfectly with the poem!!! saving this one

with all that you are...
with all that you know...
love......

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3 posted 2002-01-14 05:29 PM


Magical....Oh how I love magical...this poem is absolutely delightful. I love it. **big hugs**

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4 posted 2002-01-14 05:38 PM


Marge; A delight to read again...these fey little ones are the stuff of youthful wonder! You do these so well! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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5 posted 2002-01-14 06:50 PM


Oh wow, Marge! This is so beautiful. It is such a joy to read your poems. I love the pictures.
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6 posted 2002-01-14 08:41 PM


I could not decide if I enjoyed the poem or the pictures.I finally came to the decision that sperate they are beautiful but combined they are truely sublime,

paladin

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7 posted 2002-01-14 09:31 PM


well, our bride to be has shown a whimsical side.
lovely pictures, both in paintings and your words.

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8 posted 2002-01-14 09:39 PM


Ah Marge!  You are a lady with the true heart of a fey!  Come visit me, for I have faeries at the bottom of my garden.  I know this to be true for I have heard them sing.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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9 posted 2002-01-14 10:12 PM


Marge, this is just gorgeous! What a beautiful dance the faeries do.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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10 posted 2002-01-14 11:40 PM


Marge--You know I believe...that this is a wonderful poem!!  
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11 posted 2002-01-14 11:54 PM


A beautiful poem for fairies and unfairies alike!

You did a fantastic job with this one, Margie!

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12 posted 2002-01-15 05:43 AM


Marge, I believe
This is lovely. I enjoyed.

Dee

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13 posted 2002-01-15 11:46 AM


Ahh, Little Goose, you KNOW I had to enjoy this one...very gentle smile
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14 posted 2002-01-16 01:57 PM


NightShade~
Thank you so much~

SEA~
I'm so glad to give you a 'keeper' ..
Thank you, sweetie~

StarTime~
You are 'magic' in your reply~
Thank you for lifting my spirits~

Ellie~
Ahh .. from the 'sprite' herself, this is high praise~
I thank you, dear lady~

SmartChick~
Thank you, my friend~

Paladin~
I sooooo appreciate knowing you enjoyed this little presentation~
Thank you very much~

AWhispersCaress~
Ohhhh, I am 'whimsical' alright !
LOL .. The sprites faerily dance my soul~

Enchantress~
I have no doubt that the Faeries sing within your garden~ *Hugs*

Elizabeth~
Thank you dear lady~

Martie~
YES ... I do 'know' ...
Thank you sweet Sis~

Balladeer~
Thank you so much~

Dee~
So pleased you enjoyed~

Logan~
This *LittleGoose* smiles with you, my friend~
*Hugs* to all~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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