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craigrk
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0 posted 2002-01-14 09:17 AM




Like Adam’s rib
You take a piece of me,
Many pieces of me;
Digest my paltry worth,
Make it better, meaningful.

Ribbons of sun soaked heat
Pulse through the Venetian blinds,
Illuminate a solar grid
Across the sheets
Stained by our love-making.

Ribs and ribbons
Lazily lie down to dusk,
With you softly spooned against me,
The afternoon melts
Into creamy deja-vu.

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1 posted 2002-01-14 09:22 AM



Have I ever mentioned that I enjoy your imagery...

craigrk
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2 posted 2002-01-14 02:04 PM


You have and i appreciate how welcome it makes me feel. thanks.
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3 posted 2002-01-14 02:49 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your imagery is sooooooo beautiful behind your words and has me dreaming! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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