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Kethry
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0 posted 2002-01-14 02:36 AM


Iambic metre that runs forever
Each line runs to the next
Her words are witty, bright and so clever
Pink the hue of her text

Encouraging all she's writing of love
Or maybe something else
Her poems inspire and rise up above
The feeling in time…life's pulse

She'll call you all love but I am dearheart
Love shines perfectly on
Just when she's finished, she'll once again start
My heart dwells in Marsha song

Her word is her bonding coloured in pink
Pink for the joy of her write
Her words give me pause and cause me to think
She's known by pink's delight

Her words have wisdom deep at their core
She writes of what she knows
It inspires the loins of this I'm sure
Writing in love…it shows

Last but not least is the write of her pen
Lifts me up to the sky
She makes me feel Mushy again and again
Often her words make ME cry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



© Copyright 2002 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
peppermint35
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1 posted 2002-01-14 02:44 AM


Oh Keth!!! You've outdone yourself... again!!!

Wonderful and marvelously appropriate for the birthday darlin' girl

Your friendship is very special and it clearly shows throughout this write

Appreciative hugs,

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

Marsha
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2 posted 2002-01-14 08:13 AM


Keth darling sister of my soul, and collector of my tears, I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous.

I am soooooooo blessed I shall return later with a little extra something.

DO I LOVE THIS? Mmmmmm well let me see are there stars still in the sky? Does the moon reflect the suns light? Is rain wet? Is the sun hot? Mmmmm Yes?

Then the answer has to be YES YES YES!


Absolutely Fantastic

THANK YOU SO MUCH


I really and truly love this it’s soooooooooooo very very good.

Only five more days to go........ I'm a lucky girl and thank you always


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


N orth Carolina Girl
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3 posted 2002-01-14 09:40 AM


Kethry,a beautiful poem by a wonderful person for a wonderful person.

  


Juanita

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Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-01-14 10:06 AM



So write on - life's pulse is truly the key to her....

well done, our Keth...

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-01-14 03:00 PM




(jumps up and down in delight) Ooohhhhhh...I love it, I love it, I just know that Marsha will cherish this gorgeous gift forever! (big hugggsssss) This is soooooo beautiful, and her love and compassion always tugs at our heartstrings and makes us smile and cry! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet Marsha, we all love her and you so much! I LOVE IT!!! YAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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6 posted 2002-01-14 04:04 PM


Keth, she is lucky to have such a sweet friend as you. this was lovely. floria
Pilgrimage
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7 posted 2002-01-14 04:15 PM


Dear Keth,
Great write, right!

Nan

peaches73533
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8 posted 2002-01-14 04:26 PM


Kethry,
You have penned this tribut well with beautiful words about a beautiful person.
Peaches

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2002-01-14 05:24 PM


Kethry - you certainly have captured Mushy in this writing. I can't think of anything else that can be said about this very good friend. Except, well, she's just Mushy...

BC

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10 posted 2002-01-14 11:03 PM


Keth - I had no idea that Marsha writes in pink.  This can't be the same Marsha that posts here.lol   Well love, this is truly a nice tribute to Marsha.  I think between all the crying that you and Marsha are doing these days I am going to buy stock in Kleenex.lol

Dave  

Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-01-14 11:09 PM


This is outstanding, Keth...even for you.
A most beautiful tribute to Marsha!

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Marsha
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12 posted 2002-01-15 12:02 PM


Keth darling sister of my soul I said I'd return I have. YOU know I hope that I love these poems. Here's one in return, naturally you are now sniffing and about to sob. Mmmmmmm good I don't want you being prettier than me, it's not fair after all you are wittier and brighter. Actually darling girl YOU shine so brightly you illume the whole of the world. Just watch it you'll be getting a writ from the Sun next saying you've infringed its copyright to be the brightest thing in the heaven or the earth.

Read it and weep big smile

Keth My Heart Sister

I have a sister who is so very much more
She is an inspiration she helps me to soar
Her touch is sure and steady she aids me
And within her heart I can see true beauty
What did I do to deserve her I don’t know?
Always from her streams of love does flow
My sister of my heart my sister of my soul
Because of my sister I am once more whole

My heart sister is the reason that I’m me
It seems impossible now but once I wasn’t free
I’d been held to a track where pain was king
But my heart sister taught my heart to sing
She unlocked the gate and said fly high
And with her blessing I took to the sky
She is the wind that lifts and then carries me
My sister of heart, my soul, my reason to be

Marsha

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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