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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-01-13 11:35 PM


Tonight the moon shines upon the river
where I begin to reminisce-
The moon reflects sunlight
just as my thoughts reflect my love.
Just as the moon mirrors the sun,
your smile mirrors your heart.
And as the sun tinges the moon,
your smile tinges my heart,
while the moon and its twin sister
resemble likeness of your cheeks.
The night is bright as the moon gazes into your reflection
of my mind, as I lay my eyes on the valleys
with astounding peace in my heart
gazing the huge brother of the land
from the bottom of his feet.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-01-13 11:53 PM


Enjoyed this...James
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2 posted 2002-01-14 03:25 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is such a romantic surreal vision of falling in love! (sigh) May happiness forever fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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