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Until Our Fates Collide
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Until Our Fates Collide |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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The lullaby of your voice is enchanting mesmerizing like summer lilac rain kissing reflections upon loves windowpane to awake in the sunlight of your eyes enjoying fates amazing charms not asking to be your life long bride just to love you, until our fates collide The whispers of the morning beside you are golden riches i will never own Is it too much to ask just to love you? kiss you from parting lips to anklebone enjoying fate’s generosity...just you alone fate doesn’t care if our love is bona fide love me until fate’s fickled sword divides "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." ~ David Viscott [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-13-2002 11:41 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, you always write love so well! (sigh) May his lullaby forever sooth your heart and fill you with joy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) You are sooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
oh this is so lovely and sweet. I smell the honey in your words  Eliza Simmons |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
mmmm what lovely images you give in this poem! You deserve the truest love that this world has to offer. (hugs) RP |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Kiss you from parting lips to anklebone." My favortie part...love this poem...James |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Wow.. wonderful Victoria.. left me quite breathless  I think we're on the same page!!! Hugz, Pepper |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Noah...what would i do without you sweet Noah.. hugs aries_luv_ppl.. Thank you so much for taking time to read  Rosepetal..and so do you too sweet Joanna hugs James..thank you James..always happy when you enjoy my words Pepper..ha..i think we are too..thanks for peeking in hon.. hugss "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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