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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-01-13 10:44 PM


Without A Goodbye

Did you say goodbye
Without telling me
Seeking my muse
Where could you be

Shrouded in silence
Wondering why
I never noticed
You saying goodbye

Searching, seeking
I know not where
Silence as left me
In this deep despair

Times such as these
Nothing is clear
Baffling thoughts
Why you’re not here

The mind pondering
Dreams on hold
The heart hovers
Awaiting  to be told

Happiness as gone
Days pass on by
Is there answers
Without a goodbye


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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2002-01-13 10:53 PM


to me, the word "goodbye" is the saddest word in the English language....

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

HopeS
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2 posted 2002-01-13 11:06 PM


Thank you for your kind reply and your understanding ,
Hope

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3 posted 2002-01-14 03:18 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) So very sad, sweet friend, I too think that goodbye is one of the saddest words in all of our language, as I think hello is a much happier word! (big hugggssssss) I pray that true love now shines in your heart and bades you true happiness and comfort, and if not, I know deep down your loving heart will find it! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend sad but very beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-14 03:28 PM


oh man, goodbyes are so hard to say.
Nice poem (hugs)

RP

Alan
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5 posted 2002-01-15 12:07 PM


Hope this is a good write. Sadly beautiful. Btw.... hi
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