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Phoenix Rising
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Phoenix Rising |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
It was the day of dawning, the moment of conception~~~~ Love came striding towards me, swept me off my feet, slipped into my heart unseen. I did not know nor could have dreamed that Love would seek me out, that Love would give ~~~~my heart its wings. How like a Phoenix I was~~~~ rising out of mystery's depths to find my wings had spread to cover you, to spur you on to greater heights, through spiraling clouds, towards awe-inspiring altitudes, ~~~~breath-taking sights. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ivy, your ink is flowing!!!!!!!! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Liked the metaphor of a phoenix in this one.  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Rising like the phoenix is an awesome feeling, isn't it? Wonderfully done.  All writing comes |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ivy, I love Phoenix poetry themes, and this one is unique! Well done, sweet poetess. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your lovely words always shine with passions flame and beauty; may you forever spread your wings and dance to loves harmony! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
this is a fight poem, great images here. Robert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IvyRose~ Your pen has spilled my ink ... this is exactly what has happened to my heart~ 'It was the day of dawning, the moment of conception~~~~ Love came striding towards me, swept me off my feet, slipped into my heart unseen. I did not know nor could have dreamed that Love would seek me out, that Love would give ~~~~my heart its wings. How like a Phoenix I was~~~~ rising out of mystery's depths to find my wings had spread to cover you, to spur you on to greater heights, through spiraling clouds, towards awe-inspiring altitudes, ~~~~breath-taking sights.' I could not have written my own thoughts as breathlessly~ Thank you ... thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this vision is what is awe-inspiring. Your words literally bring the phoenix to life. BRAVO!!!**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Held my breathe as I read this - could only find one thing to mar its beauty - it ended. I never wanted that to come... jwesley |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ivy...one word...just one word...Nawww aw heck....this is awesome, simply a very beautiful poem...loved the visual side of it...I too like the use of Phoenix Rising... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Ivy I cant pick out a favorite line, I loved them all. floria |
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