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Dream Shadows |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Rest my love, for the night has come Sleep, let the vision arrive My precious,your dream love awaits Awaken only as I leave again. Feel the softest caress of your face let my lips touch, taste your own My hands flow over smoothest skin I rest lustfully here beside you. Taste the crushed grapes of passion Feel the hottest fires of desire Reach out to my waiting arms Together we scale highest peaks Dawn brings the ebb of our tide Light replaces the shadow I depart once again Our lust fed, our hunger sated. [This message has been edited by Magnus (01-13-2002 09:57 PM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is very warming verse  Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A kiss of a dream...lovely... |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...Passion bursts forth from every word of this poem. The heat of the moment wonderfully expressed. ***Ivy Rose |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahhh. . . this one brings on a yawn of contentment Sir. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sweet dreams..  no criticism here ha..~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Magnus - very nicely written, full of your warm words... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo sensually breathtaking, sweet friend, you always make me sigh with your gorgeous declarations of love! (big hugggssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sheer beauty! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I;m with noah on this one..You make the both of us sigh! You my friend, are an incredible writer Joanna |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
" the crushed grapes of passion" how beautiful are those words. lovely poem. floria |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
These shadows know all, see all, do all!!! Excellent description, powerful piece. The most pleasant of dreams to you my friend. |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
You are the best. Emotions pour from your words. Magnificent! |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Magnus, I love the passion and desire here.I have missed reading your writes. Peaches |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
you do passion very very well.... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* surely the stuff dreams are made of...wonderful writing that touches the heart of us all. Well done, Magnus. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Very tender and relaxing. I enjoyed the read. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very romantic! I do say, you are giving Sven a run for his money in the romance department of poetry! Corinne |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Very well done my friend, gentle yet passionate, lustfull yet romantic!!! Words expressed without deception...Are the beginning of a poem's conception |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Dawn brings the ebb of our tide" tender is the dawn, that brings such love....beautiful~ Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-14-2002 08:07 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Wonderfully romantic read~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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