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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-01-13 03:40 PM

Symphony Of Divinity
By: Noah Eaton
1/13/02

Hold my hand, sweet darling
Let us embrace this crystal night
Fevered in the embers of your hypnotic reverie
Skipping heartbeats through loves satin tides

Come, we’ll bade welcome into Venus’ seas
Basking in the warmth of your laughter
Playing your heartstrings in endless euphony
Kissing your reflections in mirrored rapture

Sail into my heart, oh heavenliest maestro
We are happy hopeless romantics falling into serendipity
Reciting ballads in allegro, melting in your hearts fortissimo
Suckling your sweet kiss, entwined in this vanilla fantasy

Bonding together in kismet ebb
Embracing in the flight of feathered eternity
Conducting preludes of timeless love again and again
Swaying in the refrain of perfected ecstacy

Hold me, my sweet love
Share the heavens and the chords with me
Together we’ll coo these ballads like young lover doves
Melting together in the lightning of this Symphony of Divinity

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-13-2002 03:41 PM).]

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2002-01-13 04:12 PM

Hello Noah
You do love and romance so very well and this was no exception. Take care.....Sue

Suetang

dawn to dusk
Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 68
Colorado

2 posted 2002-01-13 10:37 PM

Wonderful! Very good word usage! You write with the intellect of someone far above your age! Great job!

Noelle

"Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

3 posted 2002-01-13 10:45 PM

BRAVISSIMO!!!! Love wonderfully expressed in such vivid poetic language. ***Ivy Rose

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2002-01-13 10:52 PM

This is love language, Noah, wonderfully expressed.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-01-14 12:01 PM

Wonderful..funderful..ha..

~Vic

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2002-01-14 12:41 PM

This is a beautiful gem!
The two best 4 letter words that fit together are LOVE and NOAH! (hugs)
I would like to give you a better response but I am about to fall asleep, it's late!
Well-Done!

RP

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2002-01-14 02:05 AM

Noah - I read your writings, always full of life and love. Never stop writing my friend, never stop...

BC

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

8 posted 2002-01-14 02:13 AM

Noah, may I second what Bill says.. you have such a beautiful soul.. your words always inspirational.. your thoughts so lovingly shared with all of us.. you are a uniquely special and beautiful person.. and this poem.. well!!! it's almost as wonderful as you

Hugz,

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

9 posted 2002-01-14 03:23 AM

very tender and romantic Noah....you have outdone yourself here

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

10 posted 2002-01-14 06:15 AM

Noah,you have such a beautiful way with words when you speak of love.Don`t ever stop!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

[This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (01-14-2002 04:40 PM).]

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

11 posted 2002-01-14 06:38 AM

Noah: you write with such romance in your words darling - I loved the read! ~Roniece~

His Poet
Senior Member

since 2001-12-18

Posts 750

12 posted 2002-01-14 01:23 PM

Noah, if you're really the age of your photo, dear sir, you are far too young to be writing with this kind of maturity. Lovely word pictures throughout. I enjoyed! Cheryl

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

13 posted 2002-01-14 04:07 PM

Noah this is wonderful. Do you never run out of beautiful words. hope not. floria

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

14 posted 2002-01-14 05:41 PM

And what a beautiful symphony you have portrayed.Your words always touch my heart.
Peaches

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

15 posted 2002-01-14 05:47 PM

Beautiful, Noah.
With you poetry has a new meaning.

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