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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-01-13 12:49 PM



Color my world with love
paint me with a pallet of gentle,
splashed with hues of tomorrow.

Softly brush me with strokes of passion
capture the feeling of this moment
on a canvas of our dreams.

Use strokes against the grain
to strengthen the bonding threads
of this intricate tapestry of us.

Softly swirl in that which is you
mixed with all that I am
to become the essence of us.

Air brush a sky of forever
dab it with a wisp of enternity
where the colors~ will never fade.

Jan 13, 2001


On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-13-2002 12:51 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-01-13 12:55 PM




(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you paint your love with such joy and passion! (kiss on cheek) May his love forever airbrush your skies and sweep you off your feet into a canvas of eternal bliss! I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-13 01:05 PM


Gentle Spirit - there should be a golden frame surrounding this beautiful canvas of poetry. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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3 posted 2002-01-13 01:59 PM


Such a fine full palette of the color of LOVE, Gentle Spirit, that it demands ethereal framing.
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2002-01-13 02:11 PM


Noah, lol.....I thank you for just being you...Your
words touch me.

Chris, that is so very kind of you.  Thanks so much.  

Kacy, I can only but whisper.....thank you friend.  Hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Alan
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5 posted 2002-01-18 12:23 PM


beautiful paint job. I love the feelings behind this
alan

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6 posted 2002-01-18 11:49 AM


Donna~

Well indeed your colors will never fade.....beautiful canvas...

Lauren~



Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-18-2002 11:49 AM).]

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