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brianbeaudry
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0 posted 2002-01-13 12:45 PM


Autumn’s Dance

Walking this bright autumn trail
A trilling came to ear
Soft and lovely was the sound
Relaxing all my fear
I listened to its sweet caress
Searching for its source
Sure to find an angel perched
Trilling one more course
Search as I may I couldn’t find
The origin of this song
All directions that I would walk
It followed me along
Its melody was rich and flowing
Tempo filled with life
Charging rhythm into my gate
Ridding me all strife
It’s trilling sang of nature’s awe
Beauty shared by all
The magic of this special place
Its power to enthrall
I never found this minstrels source
Yet I danced to its strain
Skipping along this autumn path
I joined in its refrain


The picture that inspired this poem can be seen at(http://community.webshots.com/photo/20860921/23149137ZaKTPmqSVM)



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1 posted 2002-01-13 12:49 PM




(smiles) Oooooohhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, the beauty of autumn shines all around you! (big hugggssss) I love the autumn so much, this singing sparrow trills with you in this gorgeous vision! We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words are fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-13-2002 12:50 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-01-13 06:56 PM


*sigh* you do know that I love this poem...its beauty pulls me into the world that fills my spirit. *sigh* Beautifull. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2002-01-13 07:07 PM


Autumn is my favorite season, and oh, I have so long to wait for it again,
enjoyed....

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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4 posted 2002-01-13 07:11 PM


brian, you have captured the magic of the fall season expertly. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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5 posted 2002-01-13 08:17 PM


Brian...just ditto what my sister Nightshade said before me.  *S*
~Warm hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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6 posted 2002-01-14 01:28 PM


I've heard that trill
outside my windowsill
and on that golden path
I will
find
peace.

Thanks once again, for a peaceful hike.

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