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Tim
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0 posted 2002-01-13 12:38 PM


I need you not when skies are blue,
...mid bustle of the day,
When workers toil in factories;
...in parks the children play.
It is the night, when all is calm,
...and I am all alone,
That I need you by my side,
...to lead me from unknown.
For you are my beginning,
...all that I'll ever be,
You are my love, my Rose so fair,
...the ship that sets me free.
Your gentle kiss upon my brow,
...illumes dark night's befall,
As I hold you in my arms,
...I am one with all.
I gaze upon your beauty rare,
...I cede control fair Rose,
My love to you does time transcend,
...from depths of heart's disclose.
I kiss upon your satin skin,
...I taste of love sublime,
I hear your voice, sweet tender thoughts,
...I hear the start of time.
You are the grace of velvet bloom,
...by gods your splendor sent,
Green meadow washed in springtime rain,
...my Rose, my love transcendent.
Four simple words, I love you Rose,
...you are my life's adore,
I ask of you in still of night,
...your love, and nothing more.

[This message has been edited by Tim (01-13-2002 12:40 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Tim - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2002-01-13 12:42 PM


Exquisite!!
Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-01-13 12:52 PM



A beauty to compare
nay, this, your Rose?
Though she bloom
'neath words so fair
this sweet compose

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-13-2002 12:53 PM).]

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3 posted 2002-01-13 01:00 PM




(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may she forever be your hearts adore and be the rose that sings in your heart, filling it with happiness forever! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-13 01:02 PM


Tim - this is such an adoring piece of work - well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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5 posted 2002-01-13 01:09 PM


sigh, sigh, this should be written on parchment, sealed with wax and hand-delivered--um, to ME!!!

(brash little thing, ain't I?)

Truly beautiful Tim...a woman's dream.


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6 posted 2002-01-13 02:54 PM


Tim, whoever she is, she's fortunate to have someone who appreciates her like this. This is a lovely tribute and is enchanting to read. Cheryl
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7 posted 2002-01-13 03:07 PM


Tim, whomever this was written for....she is one lucky lady!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

HumbleBee
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8 posted 2002-01-13 03:44 PM


A very lovely and romantic poem. You are very talented, Tim, and I look forward to reading more of your poems.
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